- From: Geoffrey M Clemm <geoffrey.clemm@us.ibm.com>
- Date: Thu, 11 Dec 2003 07:08:49 -0500
- To: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
- Cc: w3c-dist-auth@w3.org, w3c-dist-auth-request@w3.org
I agree with those fixes. Cheers, Geoff Julian wrote on 12/09/2003 06:01:03 AM: > > Hi, > > checking the references section I note that: > > 1) we should distinguish between normative and informative references, > 2) text referring to RFC2119 is missing (probably should be added to > Terminology section) and > 3) we have entries for RFC2277, RFC2616 and XML that aren't used in the > text. > > Proposal for resolution: > > 1) Replace "References" to "Normative References", > > 2) Add paragraph from > <http://greenbytes.de/tech/webdav/draft-ietf-webdav-acl-latest. > html#rfc.section.1.2.p.2> > to section 1.1 > > 3) Remove references to RFC2277 and RFC2616, add reference to XML in > section 1.1. > > > Julian > > -- > <green/>bytes GmbH -- http://www.greenbytes.de -- tel:+492512807760 >
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