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Some spelling errors and some validation problems in https://www.w3.org/People/Berners-Lee/FAQ.html

From: Shlomi Fish <shlomif@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 30 May 2017 16:18:12 +0000
To: site-comments@w3.org
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Hi all!

I am contacting you per the instruction on Sir Tim Berners-Lee's homepage and on the W3C website FAQ.

This page https://www.w3.org/People/Berners-Lee/FAQ.html <https://www.w3.org/People/Berners-Lee/FAQ.html> does not fully validate and furthermore has the following spelling errors:

* "FOAf" - the second "f" should also be in uppercase.

* "
If you join the Opera community <http://my.opera.com/community/>, or LiveJornal <http://www.livejournal.com/>, you get a FOAF page automatically." - "Jornal" should be "Journal".

* " The world is can only really be changed one piece at a time. The art is picking that piece." - the " is" is superflous.

* "Q: What do you think about the peer-peer file sharing technology which allows people t copy copyrighted information so easily? " - "t copy" should be "to copy"

"There are those who use their energy for the purposes of furthering the technology or the content or the world in some way, but just sitting on a domain name without using it in order to cash in later does not seem to me a constructive ."
- the sentence is not grammatical.

* "For example, very few people have and easy, intuitive tool for putting their thoughts into hypertext. " - 'and' should be 'an'.

* " (Some pages for some reason don't work with Netscape 3.0 for some reason it doesn't the old HTML for some reason or perhaps it just has a bug. They do work with Internet explorer 4.0)" - this sentence needs rephrasing and the "E" in "explorer" should be capitalised.


Please look into fixing these problems.


    -- Shlomi Fish
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