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Some spelling errors and some validation problems in https://www.w3.org/People/Berners-Lee/FAQ.html

From: Shlomi Fish <shlomif@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 30 May 2017 16:18:12 +0000
To: site-comments@w3.org
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Hi all!

I am contacting you per the instruction on Sir Tim Berners-Lee's homepage and on the W3C website FAQ.

This page https://www.w3.org/People/Berners-Lee/FAQ.html <https://www.w3.org/People/Berners-Lee/FAQ.html> does not fully validate and furthermore has the following spelling errors:

* "FOAf" - the second "f" should also be in uppercase.

* "
If you join the Opera community <http://my.opera.com/community/>, or LiveJornal <http://www.livejournal.com/>, you get a FOAF page automatically." - "Jornal" should be "Journal".

* " The world is can only really be changed one piece at a time. The art is picking that piece." - the " is" is superflous.

* "Q: What do you think about the peer-peer file sharing technology which allows people t copy copyrighted information so easily? " - "t copy" should be "to copy"

*
"There are those who use their energy for the purposes of furthering the technology or the content or the world in some way, but just sitting on a domain name without using it in order to cash in later does not seem to me a constructive ."
- the sentence is not grammatical.

* "For example, very few people have and easy, intuitive tool for putting their thoughts into hypertext. " - 'and' should be 'an'.

* " (Some pages for some reason don't work with Netscape 3.0 for some reason it doesn't the old HTML for some reason or perhaps it just has a bug. They do work with Internet explorer 4.0)" - this sentence needs rephrasing and the "E" in "explorer" should be capitalised.

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Please look into fixing these problems.

Regards,

    -- Shlomi Fish
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