- From: Philippe Le Hegaret <plh@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 18 May 2006 16:15:27 -0400
- To: David Segall <david@segall.net>
- Cc: site-comments@w3.org
Hello David, I can see your points regarding the DOM public page. I guess a little clean-up and update on this page would be good. I'll try to do this next week when I'm back from traveling. Philippe On Thu, 2006-05-18 at 12:51 -0500, David Segall wrote: > > Dear Sir/Madam, > > Following a USENET discussion I believe that > <http://www.w3.org/DOM/#what> is misleading. Although it defines the > Document Object Model in the first phrase the remainder of the paragraph > refers to the usage of, and references to, the DOM. Consequently, the > USENET poster decided that the DOM had something to do with Javascript > and CSS. I think the paragraph should describe, and briefly define, the > DOM. The next paragraph purports to explain "Why...?" and should > contain the information now in "What...?". The information currently in > "Why..?" is about the definition process and belongs in a paragraph > about that. > > Thank you for your attention. > > Regards, David.
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