Re: Feedback

Sebastian,

Writing advice I got early on:

- First write an abstract. If you can't summarize in a few sentences what
you are doing, then it is going to be very hard for other to understand
- From the abstract, the following should be apparent
1) What is the problem
2) Why is it important (i.e. motivation)
3) What is your contribution (what is unique/novel)

Your introduction should dive into a bit more detail on this.

You should be answer each of these questions in a succinct and crisp
sentence.


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On Mon, Nov 14, 2016 at 4:56 PM, Sebastian Samaruga <ssamarug@gmail.com>
wrote:

> Hi all, its me again. I'm looking for feedback in this analysis phase of a
> project I'd like to start building soon. The reason I post this draft
> document again is that I've made some changes. I'd like to have some
> orientation in the right directions I should take. I hope not to be boring
> someone but 'cos what I'd like is to build kind of augmented ontologies and
> metamodels, seems like no one is willing to share this approach with me.
>
> Sorry if the document is a little rough written. I've wrote it all on a
> phone...
>
> Best Regards,
> Sebastián.
>