Scrutiny required

Folks,
 
I need expert scrutiny on some work
<http://www.infowebml.ws/topics/08-building-templates-in-owl/building-templa
tes-in-owl.htm>  I did. Any OWL expert who wants to guide me?
 
Regards,
Hans
 
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