Re: New editor's draft

"Henry S. Thompson" <ht@inf.ed.ac.uk> writes:
>> 3. I added a note following the diagram to explain the unlabelled
>>    "Full Profile" circle.
>
> OK in principle.  In practice, there _is_ no "'XInclude' class".  I'm
> afraid you need something parallel to the "Perform ID..." prose which
> currently decorates the pale-green circle.  Something such as "Perform
> XInclude processing".

Good catch. Better?

  Note: in an effort to maintain consistent relationships in the
  diagram, the label for the inner-most circle, around “Full Profile”,
  has been omitted. It should be read as if it was labeled “Perform
  XInclude processing”.

                                        Be seeing you,
                                          norm

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