Small editorial request - Entirely, for the same reason

• From: Alex Milowski <alex@milowski.org>
• Date: Thu, 6 Oct 2011 14:20:08 +0100
• To: XProc WG <public-xml-processing-model-wg@w3.org>
• Message-ID: <CABp3FNKGBJjiSfHv=un5CVPK4oX_hpMGyfpmFHyWPwjimcv42g@mail.gmail.com>

In section 4.2.3 of [1], I think that "Entirely, for the same reason"
repeated several times could cause confusion.  Maybe we should change
it to read just like 4.2.2 and say "Entirely, per the Element case
above."  That would require a bit of tweaking to the text of the
Element case.

[1] http://www.w3.org/XML/XProc/docs/xml-proc-profiles.html


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--Alex Milowski
"The excellence of grammar as a guide is proportional to the paucity of the
inflexions, i.e. to the degree of analysis effected by the language
considered."

Bertrand Russell in a footnote of Principles of Mathematics

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