- From: Alex Milowski <alex@milowski.org>
- Date: Tue, 1 Nov 2011 08:58:02 -0700
- To: XProc WG <public-xml-processing-model-wg@w3.org>
Here are the occurrences: 1. Abstract: We don't mean "data model" here. We are fully determining the infoset properties that could be used to construct a data model. 2. Section 1, Background, first paragraph: The first use of "data model" is fine. The second use needs to refer to infoset properties: "... in that the mapping XML processors perform from XML documents to data model is not rigid. " Maybe: "... in that the mapping XML processors perform is from formulation of XML Infoset properties into data model is not rigid. " Third: "This specification addresses this issue by defining several XML processor profiles, each of which fully determines a data model for any given XML document." Maybe: "This specification addresses this issue by defining several XML processor profiles, each of which fully determines the XML Infoset properties for any given XML document." Not quite sure what to do with the third paragraph. That may be OK. 3. Section 2, XML Processor Profiles, first paragraph: We don't specify all the steps. We specify the ingredients necessary to produce the XML Infoset properties. We shouldn't mention data model here. 4. Section 2.1, 2.2, 2.3, and 2.4: "approach to the construction of a data model requires the following:" We mean "XML Infoset properties" here. Maybe: "The ... approach to producing XML Infoset properties requires the following:" 5. Section 3, Note after "Class X". This use is fine. 6. Section 4, Invariants Here we mean "XML Infoset properties." 7. Section 4.1/4.2 Here we mean "XML Infoset properties." Whether the data model has invariants is up to the specification of the data model. 8. Section 6, Conformance We should think carefully about the distinction between "XML Infoset properties" as input and the use of "data model" when we re-craft this section. The example language in this section may be fine but it would be hard to tell. I think we should craft proposed language that we would like people to use that uses both "XML Infoset properties" and "data model" appropriately. -- --Alex Milowski "The excellence of grammar as a guide is proportional to the paucity of the inflexions, i.e. to the degree of analysis effected by the language considered." Bertrand Russell in a footnote of Principles of Mathematics
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