Re: Remarks on W3C Editor's Draft 24 January 2008 (first part)

/ Innovimax SARL <innovimax@gmail.com> was heard to say:
| == Serialization ==
|
| In 5.6 p:serialization, Please allow normalization-form to be also any
| NMToken (as defined later in 7.3)

Fixed.

| "include-content-type" is html and xhtml specific, since only xml is
| supported why keeping it ?
| Same for "escape-uri-attributes"

Alex?

| I would rather have "use-character-maps", but may be it is a V.next option

Yep.

| s/must support be supported/must be supported/ (die hard one...)
| s/assocaited/associated/
| s/associed/associated/
| s/evaulated/evaluated/
| s/implemention/implementation/
| s/intepretation/interpretation/
| s/occured/occurred/
| s/preceeded/preceded/
| s/preceeding/preceding/
| s/priviliges/privileges/
| s/retreive/retrieve/
| s/retreived/retrieved/
| s/stype types/step types/

Fixed.

| == http://www.w3.org/ns/1.0 ==
|
| Two things :
| if it is not a namespace please remove "/ns" from this string
| And please add a reference to xproc
| I would rather prefer to have
| "http://www.w3.org/xproc/1.0"

Uhm. I tend to think of it as closely related to the XProc namespace...
Others?

| == Reference ==
| Replace
| [[
| [RELAX NG] ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 34. ISO/IEC FDIS 19757-2:2002(E) Document Schema
| Definition Languages (DSDL) — Part 2: Grammar-based validation — RELAX NG
| 2002.
| ]]
| by
| [[
| [RELAX NG] ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 34. ISO/IEC 19757-2:2003(E) Document Schema
| Definition Languages (DSDL) — Part 2: Grammar-based validation — RELAX NG
| 2003.
| ]]
| --
| Replace
| [[
|  [Schematron] ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 34. ISO/IEC FDIS 19757-2:2002(E) Document
| Schema Definition Languages (DSDL) — Part 3: Rule-based validation —
| Schematron 2004.
| ]]
| by
| [[
|  [Schematron] ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 34. ISO/IEC 19757-3:2006(E) Document Schema
| Definition Languages (DSDL) — Part 3: Rule-based validation — Schematron
| 2006.
| ]]

Fixed.

| Please use the reference "[Serialization]" or full name instead of "[XML
| Serialization]"

Fixed.

| Replace
| [[
| [RFC 1521] RFC 1521: MIME (Multipurpose Internet Mail Extensions) Part One:
| Mechanisms for Specifying and Describing the Format of Internet Message
| Bodies. N. Borenstein, N. Freed, editors. Internet Engineering Task Force.
| September, 2003.
| ]]
| by
| [[
| [RFC 1521] RFC 1521: MIME (Multipurpose Internet Mail Extensions) Part One:
| Mechanisms for Specifying and Describing the Format of Internet Message
| Bodies. N. Borenstein, N. Freed, editors. Internet Engineering Task Force.
| September, 1993.
| ]]

Fixed.

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                                          norm

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