- From: Norman Walsh <ndw@nwalsh.com>
- Date: Wed, 03 Oct 2007 09:16:25 -0400
- To: public-xml-processing-model-wg@w3.org
- Message-ID: <m2tzp8cp92.fsf@nwalsh.com>
/ Innovimax SARL <innovimax@gmail.com> was heard to say: | s/declartion/declaration/ | s/grammer/grammar/ | s/intepret/interpret/ | s/origianl/original/ | s/resuing/reusing/ | s/specifed/specified/ | s/specifiy/specify/ | s/vlaue/value/ Fixed. | In Top of the page | | # Management of iteration counting has changed. The | p:iteration-position function was renamed to p:iteration-count and | p:iteration-size was removed. | | s/removed/added/ Fixed. Er, actually, I just deleted all that stuff since it won't be relevant in the next draft. | In 2.3 Primary Inputs and Outputs | | Please add the same précaution for "source" and "result" than the | following in 2.5 Parameters | [[ | (If the pipeline declares an ordinary input named "parameters", the | implicit primary parameter input port will be named "parameters1". If | that's not available, then "parameters2", etc. until an available name | is found.) | ]] I don't think that's really necessary. It's not going to matter to anyone unless they use parameters. | In 3 Syntax Overview | | Please add Parameter Input ports to this list | [[ | Six kinds of things are named in XProc: | | 1. Step types, | 2. Steps, | 3. Input ports, | 4. Output ports, | 5. Options, and | 6. Parameters | ]] I think of parameter input ports as a kind of input port. So I think item 3 covers it, but if you feel strongly about it, I won't put up a fight :-) | In 4.1 p:pipeline | | s/his most often occurs when the it has been/his most often occurs | when it has been/ Fixed. | In 4.2 p:for-each | Replace | [[ | Each subtree selected by the p:for-each from each of the inputs that | appear on the iteration source is wrapped in a document node and | provided to the subpipeline. | ]] | By | [[ | Each subtree selected by the p:iteration-source is wrapped in a | document node and provided to the subpipeline. | ]] Fixed. | In 4.2.1 and 4.3.1 | | Please make the "Note to implementers" in bold or whatever Ok. | In 5.1.2.2 The c:parameter-set element | Replace | "It is a dynamic error (err:XD0014) for any unqualified attribute | names to appear on a c:parameter element." | by | "It is a dynamic error (err:XD0014) for any unqualified attribute | names to appear on a c:parameter-set element. Fixed. Thanks, Mohamed! Be seeing you, norm -- Norman Walsh <ndw@nwalsh.com> | The effects of weakness are http://nwalsh.com/ | inconceivable, and more prodigious than | those of the most violent | passions.--Cardinal De Retz
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