Rewording about infosets

I've checked in an editor's draft that includes my attempt to address
Michael Kay's comment #8 on sections 1 and 2, I've reworded Section
2.2 (the first three paragraphs), Section 2.6.1, and added a new
Appendix A.3.

Anyone unhappy with the new text?

(And, Mike, are you *happy* with the new text :-)

                                        Be seeing you,
                                          norm

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