Re: Updated editor's draft: 29 Aug 2007

/ ht@inf.ed.ac.uk (Henry S. Thompson) was heard to say:
| 3.9 Syntax Summaries
|  I like the general errors, but one could/should be improved:
|
|   "It is a static error (err:XS0044) if any element in the XProc
|    namespace has element children not defined by this specification."
|
|  -->
|
|   "It is a static error (err:XS0044) if any element in the XProc
|    namespace or any step has element children other than those
|    specified for it by this specification."
|
|    [two changes]

Yep, that's better.

                                        Be seeing you,
                                          norm

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