Re: Updated language draft: 12 Sep 2006

/ Rui Lopes <> was heard to say:
| 1 Introduction
| * The last phrase of the first paragraph mentions components
| "Components in the pipeline [...]", but the second paragraph
| introduces the notion of component "Each operation in a pipeline is
| performed by a component [...]". Maybe changing to "Operations in the
| pipeline [...]" will solve this.

Thanks, Rui. I think I addressed almost all of your comments. A few
may have slipped by as the current work that Henry and I are doing to
normalize the language has had a small ripple effect in the document.

                                        Be seeing you,

Norman Walsh
XML Standards Architect
Sun Microsystems, Inc.

Received on Friday, 15 September 2006 18:51:25 UTC