Updated language draft: 12 Sep 2006

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I believe I've done the things I said I'd do, plus I've tried to
cleanup the language a little bit. I'm not sure how successfully.

As before, I encourage you to review this with an eye most keenly
towards things that you feel need to be fixed before it becomes a
public working draft.

                                        Be seeing you,

Norman Walsh
XML Standards Architect
Sun Microsystems, Inc.

Received on Tuesday, 12 September 2006 17:37:10 UTC