- From: Paul Grosso <paul@paulgrosso.name>
- Date: Mon, 04 Nov 2013 08:24:57 -0600
- To: public-xml-core-wg@w3.org
On 2013-11-04 06:35, Henry S. Thompson wrote: > Paul Grosso writes: > > >>> Section 3.1, Change controller (page 8) reads: >>> >>> The XML specification is a work product of the >>> World Wide Web Consortium's XML Working Group >>> >>> If we were referring to the February 1998 version, the WG at >>> that time was called the XML Working Group (though the document >>> itself says the spec was a product of the XML Activity). But >>> given that the reference to the XML spec is to the 5th Edition, >>> and that we are talking about the (supposedly current) change >>> controller, I think you want to refer to the "XML Core Working >>> Group" here. > Done. Yes, but: Section 3.5, Change controller now reads "XML Working Core Group" instead of "XML Core Working Group. and: Section 8.2, Change controller now reads "XML WorkingCore Group" (wrong word order and missing space). > >> [Comment on new text] >> Section 7. XML Versions, 2nd para, last sentence >> >> There is a use of the word "may" that is not capitalized. > reworded Yes, but fwiw the new text also has a "may". (I can live with it, but I just thought I'd point it out.) paul
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