Re: XHTML-Role ready for pre-last call review

Thanks very much for these comments.  These are editorial errors that 
crept in when we turned on the schema implementation chapter recently. I 
will integrate the changes before last call.

Masataka Yakura wrote:
> Hi, Shane.
>
> I found there are several issues which i think editorial in Appendix.
>
> 1. The nref "XHTMLSCHEMAMOD" refers to nowhere. It should be 
> "XHTMLMOD". And the ref to M12n 1.1 points to the old PR version, 
> won't it be updated?
>
> 2. The following sentence doesn't make sense to me.
>
>> It is divided into an attributes module and an element module for the 
>> XHTML Role Attribute Module module defined in this Proposed 
>> Recommendation. 
>
> Since the Role module defines just one attribute and no other, I 
> wonder what the other attributes and the divided element part are. 
> Also, what does the overall sentence mean?
>
>
> Regards,

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Received on Friday, 8 February 2008 17:04:16 UTC