Re-write of Benefits

I did some rewriting of the Benefits page [1], as I agreed at the last  
meeting. What is there now is an attempt to remove references to URIs  
without changing the meaning of the text. I could take it further, but  
I think that would be imposing *my* view of the benefits on that  
section, rather than staying somewhat faithful to what the group wrote.

Then again, if I *did* mess with the meaning, feel free to "mess" it back.

kc
[1] http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/Benefits

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