Re: ISSUE-20 - proposed text for intro section of section 7

Thomas,

This text looks ok to me.

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Tim Hahn
IBM Distinguished Engineer

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Thomas Roessler <tlr@w3.org> 
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05/31/07 04:56 AM

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ISSUE-20 - proposed text for intro section of section 7







I suggest to say the following:

                 "This section provides an enumeration of the security
                 information this Working Group has determined to be in 
scope
                 and considers to use in its recommendations."

Regards,
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Thomas Roessler, W3C  <tlr@w3.org>