Re: suggested editorial changes for usage guide

Hello All,

In looking at this version, I see that it still uses the old sawsdl
namespace.  It should use http://www.w3.org/ns/sawsdl  to match the spec.

Sorry for not catching this sooner.

Regards,
Joel


public-ws-semann-request@w3.org wrote on 08/20/2007 02:34:57 PM:

> Dear all,
> I apologize deeply for only getting to my final review of the Usage
> Guide so late. Even worse, my review is not quite finished, and this is
> the first email in a short series that will continue through tomorrow.
>
> Attached is an edited source of the Usage Guide which I'd like the
> editors to check and commit. In fact, I'll talk to Brahmananda tomorrow
> in person so I can make sure that he does it. 8-)
>
> The changes are all intended as editorial, and they go up to the end of
> Section 3.6, mostly. I've also removed the change log and editors' to-do
> list because they will not be that useful any more.
>
> On top of those changes, the listings 3.4-3, 3.4-4 and 3.4-5 point to
> files that contain the content of listings 3.2-3, 3.2-4 and 3.3-2 in
> turn, apparently. The links should go to updated files that incorporate
> the changes made to the listings in Section 3.4. This is left as-is in
> my edited source.
>
> Also, the current source still contains five editor's TODOs which should
> either be handled or dropped in the final document.
>
> Best regards,
> Jacek
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