- From: Doug Davis <dug@us.ibm.com>
- Date: Sun, 28 Mar 2010 15:31:28 -0600
- To: "Chou, Wu (Wu)" <wuchou@avaya.com>
- Cc: "Li, Li (Li)" <lli5@avaya.com>, public-ws-resource-access@w3.org
- Message-ID: <OF944272F8.6D8EDB4D-ON852576F4.007583AE-852576F4.00764207@us.ibm.com>
Wu, some of the edits are fine but others change the meaning quite a bit. In particular you changed: By doing so the endpoint is indicating that the corresponding WS-Eventing operations are supported by that endpoint even though they do not explicitly appear in its WSDL (ie. the WS-Eventing operations do not appear in the WSDL that MAY be retrievable by using WS-MetadataExchange GetWSDL to that endpoint). to: By doing so the endpoint is indicating that the corresponding WS-Eventing operations are supported by that endpoint even though they are implicit and do not explicitly appear in its WSDL (i.e. the WS-Eventing operations that do not appear in the WSDL MAY be retrievable by using WS-MetadataExchange GetWSDL to that endpoint). Its the stuff in parens that worries me. The new wording could be taken to imply that some WS-Eventing ops might appear in the WSDL while others may not and that would be bad. I think I'm ok with most of the other edits, but I'd prefer to leave the stuff in parens as is. I've attached a new version with just the first assertion's edits - the other assertions (in all specs) would follow the same pattern. thanks -Doug ______________________________________________________ STSM | Standards Architect | IBM Software Group (919) 254-6905 | IBM 444-6905 | dug@us.ibm.com The more I'm around some people, the more I like my dog. "Chou, Wu (Wu)" <wuchou@avaya.com> 03/16/2010 03:20 PM To Doug Davis/Raleigh/IBM@IBMUS cc <public-ws-resource-access@w3.org>, "Li, Li (Li)" <lli5@avaya.com> Subject RE: MOAP is checked Doug, Here is a change marked word file of Section 9, which incorporates some of the discussions so far and changes at word level on how to state these requirements. It is rough and attached here intended for in formation and further discussion. Thanks, - Wu Chou.[attachment "WS-Eventing-Section 9_marked_wu.doc" deleted by Doug Davis/Raleigh/IBM]
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