Re: MOAP is checked

Good points, but can be handles during last call.
thanks
-bob

On Mar 16, 2010, at 11:02 AM, Li, Li (Li) wrote:

> I've made all of the updates for MOAP.  Please look them over to make
> sure 
> I didn't miss anything.
> 
> thanks
> -Doug
> 
> Doug:
> 
> I just have some editorial comments. 
> 
> 1. WS-Eventing Section 9.1 paragraph 3 seems a paraphrase of WS-Policy
> 1.5 Attachment Sections 4.1.2 and 5.4.2. Paragraph 5 seems a paraphrase
> of WS-Policy 1.5 Framework section 4.3.1. 
> 
> 2. The same for WS-Eventing Section 9.2 paragraphs 3 and 5.
> 
> 3. The same for other WS-RA specs, including WS-Enumeration.
> 
> I wonder if we should avoid repeating or paraphrasing other spec, as we
> have deliberately removed a lot of WS-Addressing paraphrases from WS-RA.
> 
> Thanks.
> 
> Li
> 
> 
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