WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies wsenum.html,1.121,1.122 wsenum.xml,1.112,1.113 wsevd.html,1.8,1.9 wseventing.html,1.168,1.169 wseventing.xml,1.160,1.161 wsfrag.html,1.60,1.61 wsmex.html,1.110,1.111 wsmex.xml,1.97,1.98 wst.html,1.113,1.114 wst.xml,1.110,1.111

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv5874

Modified Files:
	wsenum.html wsenum.xml wsevd.html wseventing.html 
	wseventing.xml wsfrag.html wsmex.html wsmex.xml wst.html 
	wst.xml 
Log Message:
more wording edits in some "Notes" - per Ram's suggestion


Index: wst.xml
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wst.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.110
retrieving revision 1.111
diff -u -d -r1.110 -r1.111
--- wst.xml	12 Mar 2010 00:43:03 -0000	1.110
+++ wst.xml	16 Mar 2010 19:49:32 -0000	1.111
@@ -1832,8 +1832,8 @@
     </glist>
 
     <p>
-     Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to
-     change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+     Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use
+     of nested policy expressions.
     </p>
 
    </div2>
@@ -1947,8 +1947,8 @@
     </glist>
 
     <p>
-     Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to
-     change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+     Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use
+     of nested policy expressions.
     </p>
 
    </div2>

Index: wseventing.html
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wseventing.html,v
retrieving revision 1.168
retrieving revision 1.169
diff -u -d -r1.168 -r1.169
--- wseventing.html	16 Mar 2010 13:47:23 -0000	1.168
+++ wseventing.html	16 Mar 2010 19:49:32 -0000	1.169
@@ -1614,8 +1614,8 @@
          is scoped to the operations and features of the WS-Eventing 
          specification.
         </p></dd></dl><p>
-     Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to
-     change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+     Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use
+     of nested policy expressions.
     </p></div><div class="div2">
 <h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2281" id="iddiv2_1_2281"/>9.2 SubscriptionManager Assertion</h3><p>
      Services indicate support for the
@@ -1681,8 +1681,8 @@
          WS-Eventing message exchanges. Any metadata that appears is scoped 
          to the operations and features of the WS-Eventing specification.
         </p></dd></dl><p>
-     Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to
-     change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+     Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use
+     of nested policy expressions.
     </p></div></div><div class="div1">
 <h2><a name="acks" id="acks"/>10 Acknowledgements</h2><p>
     This specification has been developed as a result of joint
@@ -2516,7 +2516,8 @@
     &lt;/operation&gt;
   &lt;/portType&gt;
 &lt;/definitions&gt;</pre></div></div></div><div class="div1">
-<h2><a name="actiontables" id="actiontables"/>E Action Tables</h2><p><b>Note: this is a work in progress and may change before long</b></p><p>
+<h2><a name="actiontables" id="actiontables"/>E Action Tables</h2><p><b>Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the
+    action tables</b></p><p>
     The purpose of the action tables is to illustrate, via a separate means 
     from the normative text, the allowable order and interactions of various 
     messages and activities. The action tables are not intended to constrain 


Index: wst.html
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retrieving revision 1.113
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diff -u -d -r1.113 -r1.114
--- wst.html	16 Mar 2010 13:47:23 -0000	1.113
+++ wst.html	16 Mar 2010 19:49:32 -0000	1.114
@@ -1043,8 +1043,8 @@
          WS-Transfer message exchanges. Any metadata that appears is scoped 
          to the operations and features of the WS-Transfer specification.
         </p></dd></dl><p>
-     Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to
-     change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+     Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use
+     of nested policy expressions.
     </p></div><div class="div2">
 <h3><a name="iddiv2_1_1460" id="iddiv2_1_1460"/>7.2 TransferResourceFactory Assertion</h3><p>
      Services indicate support for
@@ -1102,8 +1102,8 @@
          WS-Transfer message exchanges. Any metadata that appears is scoped 
          to the operations and features of the WS-Transfer specification.
         </p></dd></dl><p>
-     Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to
-     change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+     Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use
+     of nested policy expressions.
     </p></div></div><div class="div1">
 <h2><a name="acks" id="acks"/>8 Acknowledgements</h2><p>
      This specification has been developed as a result of joint

Index: wsmex.xml
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wsmex.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.97
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diff -u -d -r1.97 -r1.98
--- wsmex.xml	16 Mar 2010 19:42:19 -0000	1.97
+++ wsmex.xml	16 Mar 2010 19:49:32 -0000	1.98
@@ -1952,8 +1952,8 @@
     </p>
 
     <p>
-     Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to 
-     change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+     Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use
+     of nested policy expressions.
     </p>
 
    </div2>
@@ -2136,8 +2136,8 @@
    </p>
 
    <p>
-    Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to
-    change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+    Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use
+    of nested policy expressions.
    </p>
 
    <p>
@@ -2509,8 +2509,8 @@
     </glist>
 
     <p>
-     Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to
-     change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+     Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use
+     of nested policy expressions.
     </p>
 
    </div2>

Index: wsenum.html
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wsenum.html,v
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diff -u -d -r1.121 -r1.122
--- wsenum.html	16 Mar 2010 13:47:23 -0000	1.121
+++ wsenum.html	16 Mar 2010 19:49:32 -0000	1.122
@@ -1395,8 +1395,8 @@
          is scoped to the operations and features of the WS-Enumeration 
          specification.
         </p></dd></dl><p>
-     Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to
-     change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+     Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use 
+     of nested policy expressions.
     </p></div></div><div class="div1">
 <h2><a name="acks" id="acks"/>7 Acknowledgements</h2><p>
     This specification has been developed as a
@@ -1963,7 +1963,8 @@
   &lt;/wsdl:portType&gt;
 
 &lt;/wsdl:definitions&gt;</pre></div></div></div><div class="div1">
-<h2><a name="actiontables" id="actiontables"/>C Action Tables</h2><p><b>Note: this is a work in progress and may change before long</b></p><p>
+<h2><a name="actiontables" id="actiontables"/>C Action Tables</h2><p><b>Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the 
+    action tables</b></p><p>
     The purpose of the action tables is to illustrate, via a separate means 
     from the normative text, the allowable order and interactions of various 
     messages and activities. The action tables are not intended to constrain 

Index: wsenum.xml
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diff -u -d -r1.112 -r1.113
--- wsenum.xml	12 Mar 2010 00:43:03 -0000	1.112
+++ wsenum.xml	16 Mar 2010 19:49:32 -0000	1.113
@@ -2605,8 +2605,8 @@
     </glist>
 
     <p>
-     Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to
-     change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+     Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use 
+     of nested policy expressions.
     </p>
 
    </div2>
@@ -3307,7 +3307,8 @@
    <head>Action Tables</head>
 
    <p>
-    <kw>Note: this is a work in progress and may change before long</kw>
+    <kw>Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the 
+    action tables</kw>
    </p>
 
    <p>

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diff -u -d -r1.110 -r1.111
--- wsmex.html	16 Mar 2010 19:42:19 -0000	1.110
+++ wsmex.html	16 Mar 2010 19:49:32 -0000	1.111
@@ -1146,8 +1146,8 @@
      assertion then all WS-MetadataExchange message exchanges would need to 
      be protected using the specified security mechanism.
     </p><p>
-     Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to 
-     change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+     Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use
+     of nested policy expressions.
     </p></div><div class="div2">
 <h3><a name="WSPAEPR" id="WSPAEPR"/>8.2 Associating Policies with Endpoint References</h3><p>
      It is desirable for components that provide EPRs to other components to 
@@ -1278,8 +1278,8 @@
     show above in line 17), those assertions have Endpoint Policy Subject 
     and apply to all message exchanges related to the feature.
    </p><p>
-    Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to
-    change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+    Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use
+    of nested policy expressions.
    </p><p>
     If there were additional WS-Eventing metadata available, for example 
     a specialized Feature WSDL document, then they would appear as a child 
@@ -1499,8 +1499,8 @@
          appears is scoped to the operations and features of the 
          WS-MetadataExchange specification.
         </p></dd></dl><p>
-     Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to
-     change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+     Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use
+     of nested policy expressions.
     </p></div></div><div class="div1">
 <h2><a name="bootstrapping" id="bootstrapping"/>12 Boostrapping Metadata Retrieval</h2><p>
     Although the operations described in <a href="#Retrieving-Metadata"><b>6 Retrieving Metadata about Service Endpoints</b></a>


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diff -u -d -r1.160 -r1.161
--- wseventing.xml	12 Mar 2010 00:43:03 -0000	1.160
+++ wseventing.xml	16 Mar 2010 19:49:32 -0000	1.161
@@ -2881,8 +2881,8 @@
     </glist>
 
     <p>
-     Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to
-     change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+     Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use
+     of nested policy expressions.
     </p>
 
    </div2>
@@ -3018,8 +3018,8 @@
     </glist>
 
     <p>
-     Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to
-     change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.
+     Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use
+     of nested policy expressions.
     </p>
 
    </div2>
@@ -4098,7 +4098,8 @@
    <head>Action Tables</head>
 
    <p>
-    <kw>Note: this is a work in progress and may change before long</kw>
+    <kw>Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the
+    action tables</kw>
    </p>
 
    <p>

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