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@@ -1462,24 +1462,7 @@
 
     <p>
      Components of the outline listed above are constrained as for
-     a response to a subscribe request (see <specref ref="Subscribe"/>) 
-     with the following addition(s):
-    </p>
-
-    <glist>
-     <gitem>
-      <label> <kw>[Body]</kw>/wse:RenewResponse/wse:GrantedExpires </label>
-      <def>
-       <p>
-        If the requested expiration is a duration, then the
-        implied start of that duration is the time when the
-        subscription manager starts processing the Renew request.
-       </p>
-      </def>
-     </gitem>
-    </glist>
-
-    <p>
+     a response to a subscribe request (see <specref ref="Subscribe"/>).
      Other components of the outline above are not further
      constrained by this specification.
     </p>

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+++ wseventing.html	30 Oct 2009 00:47:32 -0000	1.109
@@ -75,22 +75,22 @@
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;7.2 <a href="#AccessControl">Access Control</a><br/>
 8 <a href="#ImplConsideration">Implementation Considerations</a><br/>
 9 <a href="#metadata">WS-Eventing Metadata</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;9.1 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2185">EventSource Assertion</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;9.2 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2252">SubscriptionManager Assertion</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;9.1 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2174">EventSource Assertion</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;9.2 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2241">SubscriptionManager Assertion</a><br/>
 10 <a href="#acks">Acknowledgements</a><br/>
 11 <a href="#refs">References</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;11.1 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2323">Normative References</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;11.2 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2444">Informative References</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;11.1 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2312">Normative References</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;11.2 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2433">Informative References</a><br/>
 </p>
 <h3><a name="appendices" id="appendices"/>Appendices</h3><p class="toc">A <a href="#Advertising">Advertising Event Information</a><br/>
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A.1 <a href="#ETypes">Event Types &amp; Event Descriptions</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A.1.1 <a href="#iddiv3_1_2750">Retrieving Event Descriptions</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A.1.2 <a href="#iddiv3_1_2766">Bindings for Event Descriptions</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A.1.2.1 <a href="#iddiv4_1_2771">Binding for Unwrapped Notifications</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A.1.2.2 <a href="#iddiv4_1_2789">Binding for Wrapped Notifications</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A.1.1 <a href="#iddiv3_1_2739">Retrieving Event Descriptions</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A.1.2 <a href="#iddiv3_1_2755">Bindings for Event Descriptions</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A.1.2.1 <a href="#iddiv4_1_2760">Binding for Unwrapped Notifications</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A.1.2.2 <a href="#iddiv4_1_2778">Binding for Wrapped Notifications</a><br/>
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A.2 <a href="#NWSDL">Notification WSDLs</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A.2.1 <a href="#iddiv3_1_2816">Retrieving Notification WSDLs</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A.3 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2832">Multiple Event Information Metadata Sections</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A.2.1 <a href="#iddiv3_1_2805">Retrieving Notification WSDLs</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;A.3 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2821">Multiple Event Information Metadata Sections</a><br/>
 B <a href="#Schema">XML Schema</a><br/>
 C <a href="#WSDL">WSDL</a><br/>
 D <a href="#wrappedWSDL">WSDL for Standard Wrapped Delivery</a><br/>
@@ -886,13 +886,7 @@
     <em>xs:any</em>*
   &lt;/wse:RenewResponse&gt;</pre></div></div><p>
      Components of the outline listed above are constrained as for
-     a response to a subscribe request (see <a href="#Subscribe"><b>4.1 Subscribe</b></a>) 
-     with the following addition(s):
-    </p><dl><dt class="label"><b>[Body]</b>/wse:RenewResponse/wse:GrantedExpires </dt><dd><p>
-        If the requested expiration is a duration, then the
-        implied start of that duration is the time when the
-        subscription manager starts processing the Renew request.
-       </p></dd></dl><p>
+     a response to a subscribe request (see <a href="#Subscribe"><b>4.1 Subscribe</b></a>).
      Other components of the outline above are not further
      constrained by this specification.
     </p><p><a href="#Table6">Example 4-3</a> lists a hypothetical request to renew the 
@@ -1527,7 +1521,7 @@
     indicate a particular security mechanism used to protect the
     WS-Eventing operations supported by this endpoint.
    </p><div class="div2">
-<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2185" id="iddiv2_1_2185"/>9.1 EventSource Assertion</h3><p>
+<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2174" id="iddiv2_1_2174"/>9.1 EventSource Assertion</h3><p>
      The mechanism for indicating that a binding or endpoint conforms to the
      WS-Eventing specification's definition of an Event Source 
      is through the use of the Web Services
@@ -1585,7 +1579,7 @@
          When present, this OPTIONAL parameter indicates support for the 
          specified event delivery format Name URI.
         </p></dd></dl></div><div class="div2">
-<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2252" id="iddiv2_1_2252"/>9.2 SubscriptionManager Assertion</h3><p>
+<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2241" id="iddiv2_1_2241"/>9.2 SubscriptionManager Assertion</h3><p>
      The mechanism for indicating that a binding or endpoint conforms to the
      WS-Eventing specification's definition of a Subscription Manager 
      is through the use of the Web Services
@@ -1669,7 +1663,7 @@
       Yves Lafon (W3C).
    </p></div><div class="div1">
 <h2><a name="refs" id="refs"/>11 References</h2><div class="div2">
-<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2323" id="iddiv2_1_2323"/>11.1 Normative References</h3><dl><dt class="label"><a name="RFC2119" id="RFC2119"/>RFC 2119</dt><dd><a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt"><cite>
+<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2312" id="iddiv2_1_2312"/>11.1 Normative References</h3><dl><dt class="label"><a name="RFC2119" id="RFC2119"/>RFC 2119</dt><dd><a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt"><cite>
         Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels
        </cite></a>
        , S. Bradner, Author.
@@ -1716,7 +1710,7 @@
        , A. Vedamuthu, et al., Editors.
        World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), 4 September 2007.
       Available at <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy-attach">http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy-attach</a>.</dd></dl></div><div class="div2">
-<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2444" id="iddiv2_1_2444"/>11.2 Informative References</h3><dl><dt class="label"><a name="WSMC" id="WSMC"/>WS-MakeConnection</dt><dd><a href="http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-rx/wsmc/v1.1/wsmc.doc"><cite>
+<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2433" id="iddiv2_1_2433"/>11.2 Informative References</h3><dl><dt class="label"><a name="WSMC" id="WSMC"/>WS-MakeConnection</dt><dd><a href="http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-rx/wsmc/v1.1/wsmc.doc"><cite>
         OASIS Standard, "Web Services Make Connection (WS-MakeConnection) 1.1"
         Web Services Make Connection (WS-MakeConnection)
        </cite></a>
@@ -1906,7 +1900,7 @@
      serve as a description of the Event Type used in 
      <a href="#Table1">Example 2-1</a> and <a href="#EDExample">Example A-1</a>. 
     </p><div class="exampleOuter">
-<div class="exampleHeader"><a name="idexample_1_2740" id="idexample_1_2740"/>Example A-2: EventDescriptions</div><div class="exampleInner"><pre>(01) &lt;wse:EventDescriptions 
+<div class="exampleHeader"><a name="idexample_1_2729" id="idexample_1_2729"/>Example A-2: EventDescriptions</div><div class="exampleInner"><pre>(01) &lt;wse:EventDescriptions 
 (02)        targetNamespace="http://www.example.org/oceanwatch/notifications"
 (03)        xmlns:wse="http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-evt"
 (04)        xmlns:ow="http://www.example.org/oceanwatch"&gt;
@@ -1926,7 +1920,7 @@
      GED for this Event Type is defined on line (08) as being of type 
      "{http://www.example.org/oceanwatch}:WindReportType". 
     </p><div class="div3">
-<h4><a name="iddiv3_1_2750" id="iddiv3_1_2750"/>A.1.1 Retrieving Event Descriptions</h4><p>
+<h4><a name="iddiv3_1_2739" id="iddiv3_1_2739"/>A.1.1 Retrieving Event Descriptions</h4><p>
       Although there are many ways in which an Event Source can make its 
       EventDescriptions available, this specification RECOMMENDS the use of 
       the mechanisms described in WS-MetadataExchange <a href="#MEX">[WS-MetadataExchange]</a>.
@@ -1937,7 +1931,7 @@
       be equal to the value of its wse:EventDescriptions/@targetNamespace. An 
       Event Source MUST NOT have more than one EventDescriptions document.
      </p></div><div class="div3">
-<h4><a name="iddiv3_1_2766" id="iddiv3_1_2766"/>A.1.2 Bindings for Event Descriptions</h4><p>
+<h4><a name="iddiv3_1_2755" id="iddiv3_1_2755"/>A.1.2 Bindings for Event Descriptions</h4><p>
       For any Notification Format it SHOULD be possible to determine how a 
       given wse:eventType will appear on the wire as a Notification in a 
       Subscription created with that format. The following sections define 
@@ -1949,7 +1943,7 @@
       Format, implementations MAY provide a Notification WSDL (see below) 
       that explicitly describes the Notification operations. 
      </p><div class="div4">
-<h5><a name="iddiv4_1_2771" id="iddiv4_1_2771"/>A.1.2.1 Binding for Unwrapped Notifications</h5><p>
+<h5><a name="iddiv4_1_2760" id="iddiv4_1_2760"/>A.1.2.1 Binding for Unwrapped Notifications</h5><p>
        The information about an Event Type contained in the wse:eventType 
        element binds to a Unwrapped Notification for that type as follows:
       </p><ul><li><p>
@@ -1963,7 +1957,7 @@
          of the wse:eventType element corresponding to the type of the 
          Event being transmitted.
         </p></li></ul></div><div class="div4">
-<h5><a name="iddiv4_1_2789" id="iddiv4_1_2789"/>A.1.2.2 Binding for Wrapped Notifications</h5><p>
+<h5><a name="iddiv4_1_2778" id="iddiv4_1_2778"/>A.1.2.2 Binding for Wrapped Notifications</h5><p>
        The information about an Event Type contained in the eventType element 
        binds to a Wrapped Notification for that type as follows: 
       </p><ul><li><p>
@@ -1987,7 +1981,7 @@
      successful Subscribe request that used a particular Format IRI. The 
      following is an example of a Notification WSDL: 
     </p><div class="exampleOuter">
-<div class="exampleHeader"><a name="idexample_1_2810" id="idexample_1_2810"/>Example A-3: Notification WSDL</div><div class="exampleInner"><pre>(01) &lt;wsdl:definitions xmlns:wsdl="http://schemas.xmlsoap.org/wsdl/"
+<div class="exampleHeader"><a name="idexample_1_2799" id="idexample_1_2799"/>Example A-3: Notification WSDL</div><div class="exampleInner"><pre>(01) &lt;wsdl:definitions xmlns:wsdl="http://schemas.xmlsoap.org/wsdl/"
 (02)                   targetNamespace="http://www.example.org/oceanwatch/notifications"
 (03)                   xmlns:xs="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema"
 (04)                   xmlns:soap="http://schemas.xmlsoap.org/wsdl/soap/"
@@ -2022,7 +2016,7 @@
 (33)     &lt;/wsdl:operation&gt;
 (34)   &lt;/wsdl:binding&gt;
 (35) &lt;/wsdl:definitions&gt;</pre></div></div><div class="div3">
-<h4><a name="iddiv3_1_2816" id="iddiv3_1_2816"/>A.2.1 Retrieving Notification WSDLs</h4><p>
+<h4><a name="iddiv3_1_2805" id="iddiv3_1_2805"/>A.2.1 Retrieving Notification WSDLs</h4><p>
       Although there are many ways in which an Event Source can make 
       Notification WSDLs available, this specification RECOMMENDS the use of 
       the mechanisms described in WS-MetadataExchange <a href="#MEX">[WS-MetadataExchange]</a>.
@@ -2038,7 +2032,7 @@
       Format IRI/@Identifier, there MUST NOT exist more than one 
       Notification WSDL document. 
      </p></div></div><div class="div2">
-<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2832" id="iddiv2_1_2832"/>A.3 Multiple Event Information Metadata Sections</h3><p>
+<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2821" id="iddiv2_1_2821"/>A.3 Multiple Event Information Metadata Sections</h3><p>
      When WS-MetadataExchange is used to retrieve metadata about an Event 
      Source, recipients of mex:Metadata elements that contain Metadata 
      Sections with both the 

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@@ -67,11 +67,11 @@
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;4.9 <a href="#UnusableEPR">UnusableEPR</a><br/>
 5 <a href="#Security">Security Considerations</a><br/>
 6 <a href="#metadata">WS-Enumeration Metadata</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;6.1 <a href="#iddiv2_1_1951">Enumeration Assertion</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;6.1 <a href="#iddiv2_1_1943">Enumeration Assertion</a><br/>
 7 <a href="#acks">Acknowledgements</a><br/>
 8 <a href="#refs">References</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;8.1 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2040">Normative References</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;8.2 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2226">Informative References</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;8.1 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2032">Normative References</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;8.2 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2218">Informative References</a><br/>
 </p>
 <h3><a name="appendices" id="appendices"/>Appendices</h3><p class="toc">A <a href="#schema">XML Schema</a><br/>
 B <a href="#WSDL">WSDL</a><br/>
@@ -900,11 +900,7 @@
      Components of the outline listed above are
      constrained as for a response to an Enumerate request 
      (see <a href="#Enumerate"><b>3.1 Enumerate</b></a>) with the following addition:
-    </p><dl><dt class="label"><b>[Body]</b>/wsen:RenewResponse/wsen:GrantedExpires </dt><dd><p>
-        If the requested expiration is a duration,
-        then the implied start of that duration is the time when the data
-        source starts processing the Renew request.
-       </p></dd><dt class="label"><b>[Body]</b>/wsen:RenewResponse/wsen:EnumerationContext
+    </p><dl><dt class="label"><b>[Body]</b>/wsen:RenewResponse/wsen:EnumerationContext
       </dt><dd><p>
         This element is OPTIONAL in this response.
        </p></dd></dl><p>
@@ -1299,7 +1295,7 @@
     indicate a particular security mechanism used to protect the 
     WS-Enumeration operations supported by this endpoint.
    </p><div class="div2">
-<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_1951" id="iddiv2_1_1951"/>6.1 Enumeration Assertion</h3><p>
+<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_1943" id="iddiv2_1_1943"/>6.1 Enumeration Assertion</h3><p>
      The mechanism for indicating that a binding or endpoint conforms to the 
      WS-Enumeration specification is through the use of the Web Services 
      Policy - Framework <a href="#wspolicy">[WS-Policy]</a> and Web Services Policy - 
@@ -1388,7 +1384,7 @@
       Yves Lafon (W3C).
    </p></div><div class="div1">
 <h2><a name="refs" id="refs"/>8 References</h2><div class="div2">
-<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2040" id="iddiv2_1_2040"/>8.1 Normative References</h3><dl><dt class="label"><a name="RFC2119" id="RFC2119"/>RFC 2119</dt><dd><a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt"><cite>
+<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2032" id="iddiv2_1_2032"/>8.1 Normative References</h3><dl><dt class="label"><a name="RFC2119" id="RFC2119"/>RFC 2119</dt><dd><a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt"><cite>
         Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels
        </cite></a>
        , S. Bradner, Author. 
@@ -1460,7 +1456,7 @@
        , J. Clark, S. DeRose, Editors.
        World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), 16 November 1999. 
       Available at <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/xpath">http://www.w3.org/TR/xpath</a>.</dd></dl></div><div class="div2">
-<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2226" id="iddiv2_1_2226"/>8.2 Informative References</h3><dl><dt class="label"><a name="WSSecureConversation" id="WSSecureConversation"/>WS-SecureConversation</dt><dd><a href="http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-secureconversation/v1.4/os/ws-secureconversation-1.4-spec-os.doc"><cite>
+<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2218" id="iddiv2_1_2218"/>8.2 Informative References</h3><dl><dt class="label"><a name="WSSecureConversation" id="WSSecureConversation"/>WS-SecureConversation</dt><dd><a href="http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-secureconversation/v1.4/os/ws-secureconversation-1.4-spec-os.doc"><cite>
         OASIS Standard, "Web Services Secure Conversation 
           (WS-SecureConversation) 1.4"
        </cite></a>

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@@ -1473,17 +1473,6 @@
 
     <glist>
      <gitem>
-      <label> <kw>[Body]</kw>/wsen:RenewResponse/wsen:GrantedExpires </label>
-      <def>
-       <p>
-        If the requested expiration is a duration,
-        then the implied start of that duration is the time when the data
-        source starts processing the Renew request.
-       </p>
-      </def>
-     </gitem>
-
-     <gitem>
       <label>
        <kw>[Body]</kw>/wsen:RenewResponse/wsen:EnumerationContext
       </label>

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