[Bug 8276] New: editorial: description of wse:GrantedExpires has unnecessary text

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=8276

           Summary: editorial: description of wse:GrantedExpires has
                    unnecessary text
           Product: WS-Resource Access
           Version: PR
          Platform: All
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Eventing
        AssignedTo: public-ws-resource-access-notifications@w3.org
        ReportedBy: gilbert.pilz@oracle.com
         QAContact: public-ws-resource-access-notifications@w3.org


The description of [Body]/wse:SubscribeResponse/wse:GrantedExpires contains the
following, final paragraph:

"If this element does not appear, then the subscription will not expire. That
is, the subscription has an indefinite lifetime. It MAY be terminated by the
subscriber using an Unsubscribe request, or it MAY be terminated by the event
source at any time for reasons such as connection termination, resource
constraints, or system shut-down."

The text on how and why a subscription may be terminated is redundant and
should be removed.

Proposal:

"If this element does not appear, then the subscription will not expire. That
is, the subscription has an indefinite lifetime."


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Received on Friday, 13 November 2009 06:41:22 UTC