- From: Doug Davis via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
- Date: Sat, 07 Nov 2009 21:34:04 +0000
- To: public-ws-resource-access-notifications@w3.org
Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv11490
Modified Files:
wseventing.html wseventing.xml
Log Message:
Fix some wording that implies event sources are the ones that
send notifications - per 7970
Index: wseventing.xml
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wseventing.xml,v
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diff -u -d -r1.121 -r1.122
--- wseventing.xml 7 Nov 2009 16:33:01 -0000 1.121
+++ wseventing.xml 7 Nov 2009 21:34:02 -0000 1.122
@@ -872,7 +872,7 @@
<def>
<p>
This element contains the information necessary to convey
- notification messages from the event source to the event sink in
+ notification messages to the event sink in
a manner required by the subscriber. This element MUST contain
at least one child element.
</p>
@@ -1805,7 +1805,7 @@
<p>
If the event source terminates a subscription unexpectedly,
- the event source SHOULD send a Subscription End SOAP message to
+ SubscriptionEnd SOAP message SHOULD be sent to
the endpoint reference indicated when the subscription was
created (see <specref ref="Subscribe"/>).
This endpoint reference MUST refer to an endpoint that supports the
@@ -4011,8 +4011,8 @@
If an event subscriber specifies the wrapped event delivery format
http://www.w3.org/&wsevt.nsprefix;/ws-evt/DeliveryFormats/Wrap
in the Subscribe request message, then the event sink MUST implement
- the following abstract WSDL and the event source MUST send the
- notification messages wrapped in the element defined in the WSDL.
+ the following abstract WSDL and notification messages MUST be
+ wrapped in the element defined in the WSDL.
</p>
<example>
Index: wseventing.html
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wseventing.html,v
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diff -u -d -r1.128 -r1.129
--- wseventing.html 7 Nov 2009 16:33:01 -0000 1.128
+++ wseventing.html 7 Nov 2009 21:34:02 -0000 1.129
@@ -514,7 +514,7 @@
distinguishing reference parameter to the EndTo EPR.
</p></dd><dt class="label"><b>[Body]</b>/wse:Subscribe/wse:Delivery </dt><dd><p>
This element contains the information necessary to convey
- notification messages from the event source to the event sink in
+ notification messages to the event sink in
a manner required by the subscriber. This element MUST contain
at least one child element.
</p></dd><dt class="label"><b>[Body]</b>/wse:Subscribe/wse:Delivery/wse:NotifyTo </dt><dd><p>
@@ -1134,7 +1134,7 @@
(16) </s12:Envelope></pre></div></div></div><div class="div2">
<h3><a name="SubscriptionEnd" id="SubscriptionEnd"/>4.5 Subscription End</h3><p>
If the event source terminates a subscription unexpectedly,
- the event source SHOULD send a Subscription End SOAP message to
+ SubscriptionEnd SOAP message SHOULD be sent to
the endpoint reference indicated when the subscription was
created (see <a href="#Subscribe"><b>4.1 Subscribe</b></a>).
This endpoint reference MUST refer to an endpoint that supports the
@@ -2454,8 +2454,8 @@
If an event subscriber specifies the wrapped event delivery format
http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-evt/DeliveryFormats/Wrap
in the Subscribe request message, then the event sink MUST implement
- the following abstract WSDL and the event source MUST send the
- notification messages wrapped in the element defined in the WSDL.
+ the following abstract WSDL and notification messages MUST be
+ wrapped in the element defined in the WSDL.
</p><div class="exampleOuter"><div class="exampleInner"><pre><definitions
xmlns="http://schemas.xmlsoap.org/wsdl/"
xmlns:xs="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema"
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