[Bug 8166] New: Eventing: remove "we"

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=8166

           Summary: Eventing: remove "we"
           Product: WS-Resource Access
           Version: FPWD
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Windows XP
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Eventing
        AssignedTo: public-ws-resource-access-notifications@w3.org
        ReportedBy: dug@us.ibm.com
         QAContact: public-ws-resource-access-notifications@w3.org


2.4 says:
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We use the term "subscription manager" in this specification to refer to the
Web service that manages the subscription, whether it is the event source
itself or some separate Web service. 
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The use of the term "we" is poor wording for a spec.

Proposal:
change:
We use the term "subscription manager" in this specification to refer to...

to:
The term "subscription manager" in this specification refers to...


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Received on Tuesday, 3 November 2009 20:45:35 UTC