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Modified Files:
	wsenum.html wsenum.xml wseventing.html wseventing.xml 
	wsmex.html wsmex.xml wst.html wst.xml 
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Index: wst.xml
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retrieving revision 1.75
retrieving revision 1.76
diff -u -d -r1.75 -r1.76
--- wst.xml	20 Oct 2009 23:59:21 -0000	1.75
+++ wst.xml	3 Nov 2009 18:26:45 -0000	1.76
@@ -2255,7 +2255,7 @@
    </p>
 
    <example>
-    <eg>http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-tra/TransferPolicy.xsd</eg>
+    <eg>http://www.w3.org/&wstra.nsprefix;/ws-tra/TransferPolicy.xsd</eg>
    </example>
 
    <p>
@@ -2264,8 +2264,8 @@
 
    <example>
     <eg>&lt;xs:schema
-    targetNamespace="http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-trp"
-    xmlns:tns="http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-trp"
+    targetNamespace="http://www.w3.org/&wstra.nsprefix;/ws-trp"
+    xmlns:tns="http://www.w3.org/&wstra.nsprefix;/ws-trp"
     xmlns:xs="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema"
     elementFormDefault="qualified"
     blockDefault="#all">

Index: wseventing.html
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wseventing.html,v
retrieving revision 1.109
retrieving revision 1.110
diff -u -d -r1.109 -r1.110
--- wseventing.html	30 Oct 2009 00:47:32 -0000	1.109
+++ wseventing.html	3 Nov 2009 18:26:44 -0000	1.110
@@ -290,14 +290,14 @@
 (24)           &lt;/ow:MyId&gt;
 (25)         &lt;/wsa:ReferenceParameters&gt;
 (26)       &lt;/wse:SubscriptionManager&gt;
-(27)       &lt;wse:Expires&gt;P0Y0M0DT30H0M0S&lt;/wse:Expires&gt;
+(27)       &lt;wse:GrantedExpires&gt;P0Y0M0DT30H0M0S&lt;/wse:GrantedExpires&gt;
 (28)     &lt;/wse:SubscribeResponse&gt;
 (29)   &lt;/s12:Body&gt;
 (30) &lt;/s12:Envelope&gt;</pre></div></div><p>
      Lines (07-09) in <a href="#Table2">Example 2-2</a> indicate this
      message is a response to a request to create a subscription, and
      lines (10-12) indicate that it is a response to the request in
-     <a href="#Table1">Example 2-1</a>. lines (17-26) provide the
+     <a href="#Table1">Example 2-1</a>. Lines (17-26) provide the
      subscription manager EPR for this subscription, and line (27)
      indicates the subscription will expire in 30 hours unless
      renewed.
@@ -682,7 +682,7 @@
     &lt;wse:SubscriptionManager&gt;
       <em>wsa:EndpointReferenceType</em>
     &lt;/wse:SubscriptionManager&gt;
-    &lt;wse:GrantedExpires&gt;
+    &lt;wse:GrantedExpires ...&gt;
       (<em>xs:dateTime</em> | <em>xs:duration</em>)
     &lt;/wse:GrantedExpires&gt; ?
     <em>xs:any</em>*
@@ -880,7 +880,7 @@
 
 <b>[Body]</b>
   &lt;wse:RenewResponse ...&gt;
-    &lt;wse:GrantedExpires&gt;
+    &lt;wse:GrantedExpires ...&gt;
       (<em>xs:dateTime</em> | <em>xs:duration</em>)
     &lt;/wse:GrantedExpires&gt; ?
     <em>xs:any</em>*
@@ -977,7 +977,7 @@
 
 <b>[Body]</b>
   &lt;wse:GetStatusResponse ...&gt;
-    &lt;wse:GrantedExpires&gt;
+    &lt;wse:GrantedExpires ...&gt;
       (<em>xs:dateTime</em> | <em>xs:duration</em>)
     &lt;/wse:GrantedExpires&gt; ?
     <em>xs:any</em>*
@@ -2502,7 +2502,7 @@
 <h2><a name="policyXSD" id="policyXSD"/>F Eventing Policy Schema</h2><p>
     A normative copy of the XML Schema description for the Eventing
     Policy assertions can be retrieved from the following address:
-   </p><div class="exampleOuter"><div class="exampleInner"><pre>http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-evt/EventingsPolicy.xsd</pre></div></div><p>
+   </p><div class="exampleOuter"><div class="exampleInner"><pre><a href="http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-evt/EventingPolicy.xsd">http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-evt/EventingPolicy.xsd</a></pre></div></div><p>
     A non-normative copy of the XML schema is listed below for convenience.
    </p><div class="exampleOuter"><div class="exampleInner"><pre>&lt;xs:schema
     targetNamespace="http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-evp"


Index: wsmex.xml
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wsmex.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.61
retrieving revision 1.62
diff -u -d -r1.61 -r1.62
--- wsmex.xml	27 Oct 2009 17:25:18 -0000	1.61
+++ wsmex.xml	3 Nov 2009 18:26:45 -0000	1.62
@@ -2130,7 +2130,7 @@
    </p>
 
    <example>
-    <eg>http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-mex/MetadataExchangePolicy.xsd</eg>
+    <eg>http://www.w3.org/&wsmex.nsprefix;/ws-mex/MetadataExchangePolicy.xsd</eg>
    </example>
 
    <p>
@@ -2139,8 +2139,8 @@
 
    <example>
     <eg>&lt;xs:schema
-    targetNamespace="http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-mxp"
-    xmlns:tns="http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-mxp"
+    targetNamespace="http://www.w3.org/&wsmex.nsprefix;/ws-mxp"
+    xmlns:tns="http://www.w3.org/&wsmex.nsprefix;/ws-mxp"
     xmlns:xs="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema"
     elementFormDefault="qualified"
     blockDefault="#all">

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retrieving revision 1.80
retrieving revision 1.81
diff -u -d -r1.80 -r1.81
--- wsenum.html	30 Oct 2009 00:47:34 -0000	1.80
+++ wsenum.html	3 Nov 2009 18:26:44 -0000	1.81
@@ -67,11 +67,11 @@
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;4.9 <a href="#UnusableEPR">UnusableEPR</a><br/>
 5 <a href="#Security">Security Considerations</a><br/>
 6 <a href="#metadata">WS-Enumeration Metadata</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;6.1 <a href="#iddiv2_1_1943">Enumeration Assertion</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;6.1 <a href="#iddiv2_1_1946">Enumeration Assertion</a><br/>
 7 <a href="#acks">Acknowledgements</a><br/>
 8 <a href="#refs">References</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;8.1 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2032">Normative References</a><br/>
-&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;8.2 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2218">Informative References</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;8.1 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2035">Normative References</a><br/>
+&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;8.2 <a href="#iddiv2_1_2221">Informative References</a><br/>
 </p>
 <h3><a name="appendices" id="appendices"/>Appendices</h3><p class="toc">A <a href="#schema">XML Schema</a><br/>
 B <a href="#WSDL">WSDL</a><br/>
@@ -509,10 +509,10 @@
 
 <b>[Body]</b>
   &lt;wsen:EnumerateResponse ...&gt;
-    &lt;wsen:GrantedExpires&gt;
+    &lt;wsen:GrantedExpires ...&gt;
       (<em>xs:dateTime</em> | <em>xs:duration</em>)
     &lt;/wsen:GrantedExpires&gt; ?
-    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;
+    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext ...&gt;...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;
     <em>xs:any</em>*
   &lt;/wsen:EnumerateResponse&gt;</pre></div></div><p>
      The following describes additional, normative
@@ -622,7 +622,7 @@
 
 <b>[Body]</b>
   &lt;wsen:Pull ...&gt;
-    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;
+    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext ...&gt;...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;
     &lt;wsen:MaxTime&gt;<em>xs:duration</em>&lt;/wsen:MaxTime&gt; ?
     &lt;wsen:MaxElements&gt;<em>xs:long</em>&lt;/wsen:MaxElements&gt; ?
     &lt;wsen:MaxCharacters&gt;<em>xs:long</em>&lt;/wsen:MaxCharacters&gt; ?
@@ -712,7 +712,7 @@
      recognize the wsen:MaxTime element and return a
      wsen:TimedOut fault if no elements are available prior to the 
      request message's deadline.
-    </p><p>
+
      Note, however, that this fault SHOULD NOT cause
      the enumeration context to become invalid (of course, the data
      source MAY invalidate the enumeration context for other reasons).
@@ -727,7 +727,7 @@
 
 <b>[Body]</b>
   &lt;wsen:PullResponse ...&gt;
-    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext&gt; ?
+    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext ...&gt;...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext&gt; ?
     &lt;wsen:Items&gt; 
       &lt;xs:any&gt; enumeration-specific element &lt;/xs:any&gt; +
     &lt;/wsen:Items&gt; ?
@@ -855,7 +855,7 @@
 
 <b>[Body]</b>
   &lt;wsen:Renew ...&gt;
-    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;
+    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext ...&gt;...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;
     &lt;wsen:Expires min="(<em>xs:dateTime</em> | <em>xs:duration</em>)"?
                  max="(<em>xs:dateTime</em> | <em>xs:duration</em>)"?
                  exact="<em>xs:boolean</em>"? ...&gt;
@@ -891,10 +891,10 @@
 
 <b>[Body]</b>
   &lt;wsen:RenewResponse ...&gt;
-    &lt;wsen:GrantedExpires&gt;
+    &lt;wsen:GrantedExpires ...&gt;
       (<em>xs:dateTime</em> | <em>xs:duration</em>)
     &lt;/wsen:GrantedExpires&gt; ?
-    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext&gt; ?
+    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext ...&gt;...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext&gt; ?
     <em>xs:any</em>*
   &lt;/wsen:RenewResponse&gt;</pre></div></div><p>
      Components of the outline listed above are
@@ -921,7 +921,7 @@
 
 <b>[Body]</b>
   &lt;wsen:GetStatus ...&gt;
-    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext&gt; ?
+    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext ...&gt;...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext&gt; ?
     <em>xs:any</em>*
   &lt;/wsen:GetStatus&gt;</pre></div></div><p>
      Components of the outline listed above are
@@ -937,7 +937,7 @@
 
 <b>[Body]</b>
   &lt;wsen:GetStatusResponse ...&gt;
-    &lt;wsen:GrantedExpires&gt;
+    &lt;wsen:GrantedExpires ...&gt;
       (<em>xs:dateTime</em> | <em>xs:duration</em>)
     &lt;/wsen:GrantedExpires&gt; ?
     <em>xs:any</em>*
@@ -961,7 +961,7 @@
 
 <b>[Body]</b>
   &lt;wsen:Release ...&gt;
-    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;
+    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext ...&gt;...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext&gt;
     <em>xs:any</em>*
   &lt;/wsen:Release&gt;</pre></div></div><p>
      The following describes additional, normative
@@ -1088,7 +1088,7 @@
     Section 6 for encoding SOAP 1.1 and SOAP 1.2 faults.
     The <b>[Action]</b> property below MUST be used for faults
     defined in this specification:
-   </p><div class="exampleOuter"><div class="exampleInner"><pre>http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-enu/fault</pre></div></div><p>
+   </p><div class="exampleOuter"><div class="exampleInner"><pre><a href="http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-enu/fault">http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-enu/fault</a></pre></div></div><p>
     The definitions of faults in this section use the following properties:
    </p><p><b>[Code]</b> The fault code.<br/><b>[Subcode]</b> The fault subcode.<br/><b>[Reason]</b> The English language reason element.<br/><b>[Detail]</b> The detail element. If absent, no detail element 
     is defined for the fault.<br/></p><p>
@@ -1182,7 +1182,7 @@
      wsen:MaxTime is reached.
     </p><table border="1"><tbody><tr><td><b>[Code]</b></td><td> s12:Receiver </td></tr><tr><td><b>[Subcode]</b></td><td> wsen:TimedOut </td></tr><tr><td><b>[Reason]</b></td><td> Timeout. </td></tr><tr><td><b>[Detail]</b></td><td/></tr></tbody></table></div><div class="div2">
 <h3><a name="UnusableEPR" id="UnusableEPR"/>4.9 UnusableEPR</h3><p>
-     This fault MAY be generated when a Data Source detects
+     This fault MAY be generated when a data source detects
      that the wsen:EndTo EPR is unusable.
     </p><table border="1"><tbody><tr><td><b>[Code]</b></td><td>s12:Sender</td></tr><tr><td><b>[Subcode]</b></td><td>wsen:UnusableEPR</td></tr><tr><td><b>[Reason]</b></td><td>The wsen:EndTo EPR is unusable.</td></tr><tr><td><b>[Detail]</b></td><td><em> Details as to why the EPR is unusable. </em></td></tr></tbody></table></div></div><div class="div1">
 <h2><a name="Security" id="Security"/>5 Security Considerations</h2><p>
@@ -1295,7 +1295,7 @@
     indicate a particular security mechanism used to protect the 
     WS-Enumeration operations supported by this endpoint.
    </p><div class="div2">
-<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_1943" id="iddiv2_1_1943"/>6.1 Enumeration Assertion</h3><p>
+<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_1946" id="iddiv2_1_1946"/>6.1 Enumeration Assertion</h3><p>
      The mechanism for indicating that a binding or endpoint conforms to the 
      WS-Enumeration specification is through the use of the Web Services 
      Policy - Framework <a href="#wspolicy">[WS-Policy]</a> and Web Services Policy - 
@@ -1313,7 +1313,7 @@
      The wsenp:Enumeration policy assertion is a nested policy container 
      assertion. The meaning of this assertion, when present in a policy 
      alternative, is that WS-Enumeration is required to communicate with the 
-     subject and that the subject is a WS-Enumeration Data Source.
+     subject and that the subject is a WS-Enumeration data source.
     </p><p>
      In order to indicate that the subject supports WS-Enumeration 
      but does not require its use, an additional policy alternative should 
@@ -1384,7 +1384,7 @@
       Yves Lafon (W3C).
    </p></div><div class="div1">
 <h2><a name="refs" id="refs"/>8 References</h2><div class="div2">
-<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2032" id="iddiv2_1_2032"/>8.1 Normative References</h3><dl><dt class="label"><a name="RFC2119" id="RFC2119"/>RFC 2119</dt><dd><a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt"><cite>
+<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2035" id="iddiv2_1_2035"/>8.1 Normative References</h3><dl><dt class="label"><a name="RFC2119" id="RFC2119"/>RFC 2119</dt><dd><a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt"><cite>
         Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels
        </cite></a>
        , S. Bradner, Author. 
@@ -1456,7 +1456,7 @@
        , J. Clark, S. DeRose, Editors.
        World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), 16 November 1999. 
       Available at <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/xpath">http://www.w3.org/TR/xpath</a>.</dd></dl></div><div class="div2">
-<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2218" id="iddiv2_1_2218"/>8.2 Informative References</h3><dl><dt class="label"><a name="WSSecureConversation" id="WSSecureConversation"/>WS-SecureConversation</dt><dd><a href="http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-secureconversation/v1.4/os/ws-secureconversation-1.4-spec-os.doc"><cite>
+<h3><a name="iddiv2_1_2221" id="iddiv2_1_2221"/>8.2 Informative References</h3><dl><dt class="label"><a name="WSSecureConversation" id="WSSecureConversation"/>WS-SecureConversation</dt><dd><a href="http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-secureconversation/v1.4/os/ws-secureconversation-1.4-spec-os.doc"><cite>
         OASIS Standard, "Web Services Secure Conversation 
           (WS-SecureConversation) 1.4"
        </cite></a>
@@ -1658,7 +1658,7 @@
   &lt;xs:element name="RenewResponse"&gt;
     &lt;xs:complexType&gt;
       &lt;xs:sequence&gt;
-        &lt;xs:element name="GrnatedExpires" type="tns:MiniExpirationType" 
+        &lt;xs:element name="GrantedExpires" type="tns:MiniExpirationType" 
                     minOccurs="0" /&gt;
         &lt;xs:element name="EnumerationContext" 
                     type="tns:EnumerationContextType" 
@@ -1734,10 +1734,10 @@
 
   &lt;xs:simpleType name="EnumerationEndCodeType"&gt;
     &lt;xs:restriction base="xs:anyURI"&gt;
-    &lt;xs:enumeration value=
-      "http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-enu/SourceShuttingDown" /&gt;
-    &lt;xs:enumeration value=
-      "http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-enu/SourceCancelling" /&gt;
+      &lt;xs:enumeration value=
+        "http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-enu/SourceShuttingDown" /&gt;
+      &lt;xs:enumeration value=
+        "http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-enu/SourceCancelling" /&gt;
     &lt;/xs:restriction&gt;
   &lt;/xs:simpleType&gt;
 
@@ -1857,7 +1857,7 @@
 <h2><a name="policyXSD" id="policyXSD"/>C Enumeration Policy Schema</h2><p>
     A normative copy of the XML Schema description for the Enumeration
     Policy assertion can be retrieved from the following address: 
-   </p><div class="exampleOuter"><div class="exampleInner"><pre>http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-enu/EnumerationPolicy.xsd</pre></div></div><p>
+   </p><div class="exampleOuter"><div class="exampleInner"><pre><a href="http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-enu/EnumerationPolicy.xsd">http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-enu/EnumerationPolicy.xsd</a></pre></div></div><p>
     A non-normative copy of the XML schema is listed below for convenience. 
    </p><div class="exampleOuter"><div class="exampleInner"><pre>&lt;xs:schema
     targetNamespace="http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-enp"

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--- wsenum.xml	30 Oct 2009 00:47:34 -0000	1.73
+++ wsenum.xml	3 Nov 2009 18:26:44 -0000	1.74
@@ -874,10 +874,10 @@
 
 <kw>[Body]</kw>
   &lt;wsen:EnumerateResponse ...>
-    &lt;wsen:GrantedExpires&gt;
+    &lt;wsen:GrantedExpires ...&gt;
       (<emph>xs:dateTime</emph> | <emph>xs:duration</emph>)
     &lt;/wsen:GrantedExpires> ?
-    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext>...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext>
+    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext ...>...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext>
     <emph>xs:any</emph>*
   &lt;/wsen:EnumerateResponse></eg>
     </example>
@@ -1038,7 +1038,7 @@
 
 <kw>[Body]</kw>
   &lt;wsen:Pull ...>
-    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext>...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext>
+    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext ...>...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext>
     &lt;wsen:MaxTime&gt;<emph>xs:duration</emph>&lt;/wsen:MaxTime> ?
     &lt;wsen:MaxElements&gt;<emph>xs:long</emph>&lt;/wsen:MaxElements> ?
     &lt;wsen:MaxCharacters&gt;<emph>xs:long</emph>&lt;/wsen:MaxCharacters> ?
@@ -1186,9 +1186,7 @@
      recognize the wsen:MaxTime element and return a
      wsen:TimedOut fault if no elements are available prior to the 
      request message's deadline.
-    </p>
 
-    <p>
      Note, however, that this fault SHOULD NOT cause
      the enumeration context to become invalid (of course, the data
      source MAY invalidate the enumeration context for other reasons).
@@ -1208,7 +1206,7 @@
 
 <kw>[Body]</kw>
   &lt;wsen:PullResponse ...>
-    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext>...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext> ?
+    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext ...>...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext> ?
     &lt;wsen:Items> 
       &lt;xs:any> enumeration-specific element &lt;/xs:any> +
     &lt;/wsen:Items> ?
@@ -1400,7 +1398,7 @@
 
 <kw>[Body]</kw>
   &lt;wsen:Renew ...>
-    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext>...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext>
+    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext ...>...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext>
     &lt;wsen:Expires min="(<emph>xs:dateTime</emph> | <emph>xs:duration</emph>)"?
                  max="(<emph>xs:dateTime</emph> | <emph>xs:duration</emph>)"?
                  exact="<emph>xs:boolean</emph>"? ...&gt;
@@ -1457,10 +1455,10 @@
 
 <kw>[Body]</kw>
   &lt;wsen:RenewResponse ...>
-    &lt;wsen:GrantedExpires&gt;
+    &lt;wsen:GrantedExpires ...&gt;
       (<emph>xs:dateTime</emph> | <emph>xs:duration</emph>)
     &lt;/wsen:GrantedExpires> ?
-    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext>...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext> ?
+    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext ...>...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext> ?
     <emph>xs:any</emph>*
   &lt;/wsen:RenewResponse></eg>
     </example>
@@ -1512,7 +1510,7 @@
 
 <kw>[Body]</kw>
   &lt;wsen:GetStatus ...>
-    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext>...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext> ?
+    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext ...>...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext> ?
     <emph>xs:any</emph>*
   &lt;/wsen:GetStatus></eg>
     </example>
@@ -1536,7 +1534,7 @@
 
 <kw>[Body]</kw>
   &lt;wsen:GetStatusResponse ...>
-    &lt;wsen:GrantedExpires&gt;
+    &lt;wsen:GrantedExpires ...&gt;
       (<emph>xs:dateTime</emph> | <emph>xs:duration</emph>)
     &lt;/wsen:GrantedExpires> ?
     <emph>xs:any</emph>*
@@ -1573,7 +1571,7 @@
 
 <kw>[Body]</kw>
   &lt;wsen:Release ...>
-    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext>...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext>
+    &lt;wsen:EnumerationContext ...>...&lt;/wsen:EnumerationContext>
     <emph>xs:any</emph>*
   &lt;/wsen:Release></eg>
     </example>
@@ -1798,7 +1796,7 @@
    </p>
 
    <example>
-    <eg>http://www.w3.org/&wsenu.nsprefix;/ws-enu/fault</eg>
+    <eg><loc href="http://www.w3.org/&wsenu.nsprefix;/ws-enu/fault">http://www.w3.org/&wsenu.nsprefix;/ws-enu/fault</loc></eg>
    </example>
    
    <p>
@@ -2145,7 +2143,7 @@
     <head>UnusableEPR</head>
    
     <p>
-     This fault MAY be generated when a Data Source detects
+     This fault MAY be generated when a data source detects
      that the wsen:EndTo EPR is unusable.
     </p>
    
@@ -2393,7 +2391,7 @@
      The wsenp:Enumeration policy assertion is a nested policy container 
      assertion. The meaning of this assertion, when present in a policy 
      alternative, is that WS-Enumeration is required to communicate with the 
-     subject and that the subject is a WS-Enumeration Data Source.
+     subject and that the subject is a WS-Enumeration data source.
     </p>
 
     <p>
@@ -2902,7 +2900,7 @@
   &lt;xs:element name="RenewResponse">
     &lt;xs:complexType>
       &lt;xs:sequence>
-        &lt;xs:element name="GrnatedExpires" type="tns:MiniExpirationType" 
+        &lt;xs:element name="GrantedExpires" type="tns:MiniExpirationType" 
                     minOccurs="0" />
         &lt;xs:element name="EnumerationContext" 
                     type="tns:EnumerationContextType" 
@@ -2978,10 +2976,10 @@
 
   &lt;xs:simpleType name="EnumerationEndCodeType">
     &lt;xs:restriction base="xs:anyURI">
-    &lt;xs:enumeration value=
-      "http://www.w3.org/&wsenu.nsprefix;/ws-enu/SourceShuttingDown" />
-    &lt;xs:enumeration value=
-      "http://www.w3.org/&wsenu.nsprefix;/ws-enu/SourceCancelling" />
+      &lt;xs:enumeration value=
+        "http://www.w3.org/&wsenu.nsprefix;/ws-enu/SourceShuttingDown" />
+      &lt;xs:enumeration value=
+        "http://www.w3.org/&wsenu.nsprefix;/ws-enu/SourceCancelling" />
     &lt;/xs:restriction>
   &lt;/xs:simpleType>
 
@@ -3125,7 +3123,7 @@
    </p>
 
    <example>
-    <eg>http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-enu/EnumerationPolicy.xsd</eg>
+    <eg><loc href='http://www.w3.org/&wsenu.nsprefix;/ws-enu/EnumerationPolicy.xsd'>http://www.w3.org/&wsenu.nsprefix;/ws-enu/EnumerationPolicy.xsd</loc></eg>
    </example>
 
    <p>
@@ -3134,8 +3132,8 @@
 
    <example>
     <eg>&lt;xs:schema
-    targetNamespace="http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-enp"
-    xmlns:tns="http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-enp"
+    targetNamespace="http://www.w3.org/&wsenu.nsprefix;/ws-enp"
+    xmlns:tns="http://www.w3.org/&wsenu.nsprefix;/ws-enp"
     xmlns:xs="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema"
     elementFormDefault="qualified"
     blockDefault="#all">


Index: wseventing.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wseventing.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.101
retrieving revision 1.102
diff -u -d -r1.101 -r1.102
--- wseventing.xml	30 Oct 2009 00:47:33 -0000	1.101
+++ wseventing.xml	3 Nov 2009 18:26:44 -0000	1.102
@@ -376,7 +376,7 @@
 (24)           &lt;/ow:MyId&gt;
 (25)         &lt;/wsa:ReferenceParameters&gt;
 (26)       &lt;/wse:SubscriptionManager&gt;
-(27)       &lt;wse:Expires&gt;P0Y0M0DT30H0M0S&lt;/wse:Expires&gt;
+(27)       &lt;wse:GrantedExpires&gt;P0Y0M0DT30H0M0S&lt;/wse:GrantedExpires&gt;
 (28)     &lt;/wse:SubscribeResponse&gt;
 (29)   &lt;/s12:Body&gt;
 (30) &lt;/s12:Envelope&gt;</eg>
@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@
      Lines (07-09) in <specref ref="Table2"/> indicate this
      message is a response to a request to create a subscription, and
      lines (10-12) indicate that it is a response to the request in
-     <specref ref="Table1"/>. lines (17-26) provide the
+     <specref ref="Table1"/>. Lines (17-26) provide the
      subscription manager EPR for this subscription, and line (27)
      indicates the subscription will expire in 30 hours unless
      renewed.
@@ -1182,7 +1182,7 @@
     &lt;wse:SubscriptionManager&gt;
       <emph>wsa:EndpointReferenceType</emph>
     &lt;/wse:SubscriptionManager&gt;
-    &lt;wse:GrantedExpires&gt;
+    &lt;wse:GrantedExpires ...&gt;
       (<emph>xs:dateTime</emph> | <emph>xs:duration</emph>)
     &lt;/wse:GrantedExpires&gt; ?
     <emph>xs:any</emph>*
@@ -1453,7 +1453,7 @@
 
 <kw>[Body]</kw>
   &lt;wse:RenewResponse ...&gt;
-    &lt;wse:GrantedExpires&gt;
+    &lt;wse:GrantedExpires ...&gt;
       (<emph>xs:dateTime</emph> | <emph>xs:duration</emph>)
     &lt;/wse:GrantedExpires&gt; ?
     <emph>xs:any</emph>*
@@ -1587,7 +1587,7 @@
 
 <kw>[Body]</kw>
   &lt;wse:GetStatusResponse ...&gt;
-    &lt;wse:GrantedExpires&gt;
+    &lt;wse:GrantedExpires ...&gt;
       (<emph>xs:dateTime</emph> | <emph>xs:duration</emph>)
     &lt;/wse:GrantedExpires&gt; ?
     <emph>xs:any</emph>*
@@ -4112,7 +4112,7 @@
    </p>
 
    <example>
-    <eg>http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-evt/EventingsPolicy.xsd</eg>
+    <eg><loc href='http://www.w3.org/&wsevt.nsprefix;/ws-evt/EventingPolicy.xsd'>http://www.w3.org/&wsevt.nsprefix;/ws-evt/EventingPolicy.xsd</loc></eg>
    </example>
 
    <p>
@@ -4121,8 +4121,8 @@
 
    <example>
     <eg>&lt;xs:schema
-    targetNamespace="http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-evp"
-    xmlns:tns="http://www.w3.org/2009/09/ws-evp"
+    targetNamespace="http://www.w3.org/&wsevt.nsprefix;/ws-evp"
+    xmlns:tns="http://www.w3.org/&wsevt.nsprefix;/ws-evp"
     xmlns:xs="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema"
     elementFormDefault="qualified"
     blockDefault="#all">

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