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Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv29864 Modified Files: wseventing.html wseventing.xml Log Message: typos s/Line/line/g Index: wseventing.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wseventing.xml,v retrieving revision 1.51 retrieving revision 1.52 diff -u -d -r1.51 -r1.52 --- wseventing.xml 26 Jun 2009 13:25:30 -0000 1.51 +++ wseventing.xml 26 Jun 2009 13:37:17 -0000 1.52 @@ -339,20 +339,20 @@ <p> Lines (07-09) in <specref ref="Table1"/> indicate the - message is a request to create a subscription, and Line (16) + message is a request to create a subscription, and line (16) indicates that it is sent to a hypothetical event source of ocean events. </p> <p> - While Lines (13-15) indicate where a reply should be sent, - Lines (20-29) indicate where and how notifications should be + While lines (13-15) indicate where a reply should be sent, + lines (20-29) indicate where and how notifications should be delivered; there is no requirement that these match. The absence - of a Mode attribute on Line (20) indicates that notifications + of a Mode attribute on line (20) indicates that notifications should be delivered using Push mode; that is, they should be asynchronously sent as SOAP messages to the endpoint described in - lines (21-28). Note that Lines (25-27) illustrate a typical - pattern where the event sink lists a reference parameter (Line 26) + lines (21-28). Note that lines (25-27) illustrate a typical + pattern where the event sink lists a reference parameter (line 26) that identifies the subscription and will be included in each notification. </p> @@ -399,9 +399,9 @@ <p> Lines (07-09) in <specref ref="Table2"/> indicate this message is a response to a request to create a subscription, and - Lines (10-12) indicate that it is a response to the request in - <specref ref="Table1"/>. Lines (17-26) provide the - subscription manager EPR for this subscription, and Line (27) + lines (10-12) indicate that it is a response to the request in + <specref ref="Table1"/>. lines (17-26) provide the + subscription manager EPR for this subscription, and line (27) indicates the subscription will expire in 30 hours unless renewed. </p> @@ -1255,7 +1255,7 @@ </example> <p> - Like the request in <specref ref="Table1"/>, Lines + Like the request in <specref ref="Table1"/>, lines (07-09) of <specref ref="Table4"/> indicate the message is a request to create a subscription. Line (19) indicates that it is sent to a hypothetical event source of ocean events. @@ -1263,8 +1263,8 @@ <p> Lines (13-18) indicate where to send the response to this - request, Lines (23-30) indicate where to send a SubscriptionEnd - message if necessary, and Lines (31-34) indicate how and where to + request, lines (23-30) indicate where to send a SubscriptionEnd + message if necessary, and lines (31-34) indicate how and where to send notifications. </p> @@ -1322,19 +1322,19 @@ </example> <p> - Like the response in <specref ref="Table2"/>, Lines + Like the response in <specref ref="Table2"/>, lines (08-10) of <specref ref="Table5"/> indicate this message is - a response to a request to create a subscription, and Lines + a response to a request to create a subscription, and lines (11-13) indicate that it is a response to the request in <specref ref="Table4"/> . Lines (14-17) indicate the response is - sent to the event sink indicated in Lines (13-18) of + sent to the event sink indicated in lines (13-18) of <specref ref="Table4"/>. Lines (21-30) provide the address of the subscription manager for this subscription; note that this particular response uses the global wse:Identifier element - defined by this specification. Finally, Line (31) indicates the + defined by this specification. Finally, line (31) indicates the subscription will expire on 1 July 2004 unless renewed; there is no requirement that this time be necessarily longer or shorter - than the requested expiration (Line (41) of + than the requested expiration (line (41) of <specref ref="Table4"/>). </p> </div2> @@ -1889,9 +1889,9 @@ <p> Line (08) is the action URI for Subscription End. Lines (10-13) indicate the message is sent to the EndTo of the - subscribe request (Lines (23-30) in <specref ref="Table4"/> + subscribe request (lines (23-30) in <specref ref="Table4"/> .). Line (17) indicates the event source is shutting down, and - Lines (18-20) indicate that the event source was going off + lines (18-20) indicate that the event source was going off line. </p> </div2> @@ -1963,9 +1963,9 @@ <p> Lines (13-15) indicate the message is sent to the endpoint - indicated by the subscribe request (Lines (32-39) in + indicated by the subscribe request (lines (32-39) in <specref ref="Table4"/>). Line (17) matches the filter in the - subscribe request (Lines (42-45) in <specref ref="Table4"/>). + subscribe request (lines (42-45) in <specref ref="Table4"/>). </p> </div1> Index: wseventing.html =================================================================== RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wseventing.html,v retrieving revision 1.59 retrieving revision 1.60 diff -u -d -r1.59 -r1.60 --- wseventing.html 26 Jun 2009 13:25:30 -0000 1.59 +++ wseventing.html 26 Jun 2009 13:37:17 -0000 1.60 @@ -247,18 +247,18 @@ (31) </s12:Body> (32) </s12:Envelope></pre></div></div><p> Lines (07-09) in <a href="#Table1">Example 2-1</a> indicate the - message is a request to create a subscription, and Line (16) + message is a request to create a subscription, and line (16) indicates that it is sent to a hypothetical event source of ocean events. </p><p> - While Lines (13-15) indicate where a reply should be sent, - Lines (20-29) indicate where and how notifications should be + While lines (13-15) indicate where a reply should be sent, + lines (20-29) indicate where and how notifications should be delivered; there is no requirement that these match. The absence - of a Mode attribute on Line (20) indicates that notifications + of a Mode attribute on line (20) indicates that notifications should be delivered using Push mode; that is, they should be asynchronously sent as SOAP messages to the endpoint described in - lines (21-28). Note that Lines (25-27) illustrate a typical - pattern where the event sink lists a reference parameter (Line 26) + lines (21-28). Note that lines (25-27) illustrate a typical + pattern where the event sink lists a reference parameter (line 26) that identifies the subscription and will be included in each notification. </p><p><a href="#Table2">Example 2-2</a> lists a hypothetical response to the request in @@ -296,9 +296,9 @@ (30) </s12:Envelope></pre></div></div><p> Lines (07-09) in <a href="#Table2">Example 2-2</a> indicate this message is a response to a request to create a subscription, and - Lines (10-12) indicate that it is a response to the request in - <a href="#Table1">Example 2-1</a>. Lines (17-26) provide the - subscription manager EPR for this subscription, and Line (27) + lines (10-12) indicate that it is a response to the request in + <a href="#Table1">Example 2-1</a>. lines (17-26) provide the + subscription manager EPR for this subscription, and line (27) indicates the subscription will expire in 30 hours unless renewed. </p></div></div><div class="div1"> @@ -728,14 +728,14 @@ (45) </wse:Subscribe> (46) </s12:Body> (47) </s12:Envelope></pre></div></div><p> - Like the request in <a href="#Table1">Example 2-1</a>, Lines + Like the request in <a href="#Table1">Example 2-1</a>, lines (07-09) of <a href="#Table4">Example 4-1</a> indicate the message is a request to create a subscription. Line (19) indicates that it is sent to a hypothetical event source of ocean events. </p><p> Lines (13-18) indicate where to send the response to this - request, Lines (23-30) indicate where to send a SubscriptionEnd - message if necessary, and Lines (31-34) indicate how and where to + request, lines (23-30) indicate where to send a SubscriptionEnd + message if necessary, and lines (31-34) indicate how and where to send notifications. </p><p> Line (41) indicates the event sink would prefer to have the @@ -780,19 +780,19 @@ (32) </wse:SubscribeResponse> (33) </s12:Body> (34) </s12:Envelope></pre></div></div><p> - Like the response in <a href="#Table2">Example 2-2</a>, Lines + Like the response in <a href="#Table2">Example 2-2</a>, lines (08-10) of <a href="#Table5">Example 4-2</a> indicate this message is - a response to a request to create a subscription, and Lines + a response to a request to create a subscription, and lines (11-13) indicate that it is a response to the request in <a href="#Table4">Example 4-1</a> . Lines (14-17) indicate the response is - sent to the event sink indicated in Lines (13-18) of + sent to the event sink indicated in lines (13-18) of <a href="#Table4">Example 4-1</a>. Lines (21-30) provide the address of the subscription manager for this subscription; note that this particular response uses the global wse:Identifier element - defined by this specification. Finally, Line (31) indicates the + defined by this specification. Finally, line (31) indicates the subscription will expire on 1 July 2004 unless renewed; there is no requirement that this time be necessarily longer or shorter - than the requested expiration (Line (41) of + than the requested expiration (line (41) of <a href="#Table4">Example 4-1</a>). </p></div><div class="div2"> <h3><a name="Renew" id="Renew"/>4.2 Renew</h3><p> @@ -1164,9 +1164,9 @@ (23) </s12:Envelope></pre></div></div><p> Line (08) is the action URI for Subscription End. Lines (10-13) indicate the message is sent to the EndTo of the - subscribe request (Lines (23-30) in <a href="#Table4">Example 4-1</a> + subscribe request (lines (23-30) in <a href="#Table4">Example 4-1</a> .). Line (17) indicates the event source is shutting down, and - Lines (18-20) indicate that the event source was going off + lines (18-20) indicate that the event source was going off line. </p></div></div><div class="div1"> <h2><a name="Notifications" id="Notifications"/>5 Notifications</h2><p> @@ -1221,9 +1221,9 @@ (34) </s12:Body> (35) </s12:Envelope></pre></div></div><p> Lines (13-15) indicate the message is sent to the endpoint - indicated by the subscribe request (Lines (32-39) in + indicated by the subscribe request (lines (32-39) in <a href="#Table4">Example 4-1</a>). Line (17) matches the filter in the - subscribe request (Lines (42-45) in <a href="#Table4">Example 4-1</a>). + subscribe request (lines (42-45) in <a href="#Table4">Example 4-1</a>). </p></div><div class="div1"> <h2><a name="Faults" id="Faults"/>6 Faults</h2><p> All fault messages defined in this specification MUST be sent
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