- From: Felix Sasaki <fsasaki@w3.org>
- Date: Sat, 22 Nov 2008 11:27:10 +0900
- To: Frederick Hirsch <frederick.hirsch@nokia.com>
- CC: public-ws-policy@w3.org, W3C WS-Policy Editors <public-ws-policy-eds@w3.org>
Hello Frederick, just FYI: Frederick Hirsch さんは書きました: > Attached are an update to the Framework Errata document, and a new > Primer Errata document. > > This message is requesting the chairs and WG for formal WG approval of > these documents and publication. > > Once approved they can be checked into CVS [1]. This will update the > content referenced from the Framework Recommendation [2] to the > Framework Errata, making the Framework errata visible. > > The Primer Note does not have a link to the errata. I recommend that > the WS-Policy WG home page [3] be updated with a link to the Errata > document for the Primer. From the W3C process you can have an errata document only for Recommendations. However, if the WG is fine to maintain a document like what your propose, that's fine. You just have to be aware of the informal status of that document. > > Separately I ask whether we might also update the note to include a > link to the primer errata document. I'm not sure if that is OK - to publish a WG Note with a link to an errata document. I'll check and come back to you. Felix > > Thanks to Asir for reviewing drafts of the errata documents. > > regards, Frederick > > Frederick Hirsch > Nokia > > [1] they would both be checked into the directory WWW/2002/ws/policy/7 > in /w3ccvs > > [2] http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/ > > [3] http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/ , Add errata link next to entry > in bullet list for primer > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > W3C <http://www.w3.org/> > > > Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework Errata > > > 21 November 2008 > > Latest version: > http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/7/framework-errata.html > Editors: > Asir S Vedamuthu, Microsoft Corporation > David Orchard, BEA Systems, Inc. > Frederick Hirsch, Nokia > Maryann Hondo, IBM Corporation > Prasad Yendluri, webMethods (A subsidiary of Software AG) > Toufic Boubez, Layer 7 Technologies > Ümit Yalçinalp, SAP AG. > > Last modified: $Date: 2007/09/25 03:43:31 $ > > Copyright <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Copyright> > (©) 2007 W3C <http://www.w3.org/>^® (MIT <http://www.csail.mit.edu/>, > ERCIM <http://www.ercim.org/>, Keio <http://www.keio.ac.jp/>), All > Rights Reserved. W3C liability > <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Legal_Disclaimer>, > trademark > <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#W3C_Trademarks> and > document use <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/copyright-documents> > rules apply. > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > > Abstract > > This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy 1.5 > - Framework <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/> > specification; for updates see the latest version of that document. > > The errata are numbered, classified as Substantive <#substantive> or > Editorial <#editorial>, and listed in reverse chronological order of > their date of publication in each category. > > Each entry has the following information: > > * A unique entry number > * The date it was added to the errata page. > * The section referred to. > * A description of the problem and correction if applicable. > Changes to the text of the spec are indicated thus: deleted > text, new text, modified text . > * A rationale for making the change (not required for editorial > errata). > > Changes to the text of the specification are indicated thus: new, > added text, modified text, and deleted text. Substantive corrections > are proposed by the Web Services Policy Working Group > <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/> (part of the Web Services Activity > <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/>), which has consensus that they are > appropriate; they are not to be considered normative until approved by > a Call for Review of Proposed Corrections > <http://www.w3.org/2004/02/Process-20040205/tr.html#cfr-corrections> > or a Call for Review of an Edited Recommendation > <http://www.w3.org/2004/02/Process-20040205/tr.html#cfr-edited>. > > The Working Group is tracking all comments via Bugzilla > <http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/buglist.cgi?query_format=advanced&short_desc_type=allwordssubstr&short_desc=&product=WS-Policy&component=Framework&component=Framework%2BAttachment&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BGuidelines&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BPrimer> > and highly prefers to receive comments via this system. If access to > Bugzilla is not feasible, you may send your comments to the mailing > list public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org > <mailto:public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org> mailing list (public archive > <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-comments/>). > Each Bugzilla entry and email message should contain only one comment. > All comments on this specification should be made following the > Description for Issues <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/#issues> of > the Working Group. It will be very helpful if you include the string > [WS-Policy-errata] in the subject line of your comment. > > > Status of this Document > > This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy 1.5 > - Framework <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/> > specification; that were known at the time of publication of this > document. > > None of the errata reported in this document have been approved by a > Call for Review of Proposed Corrections or a Call for Review of an > Edited Recommendation. As a consequence, they must not be considered > to be normative. > > > Table of Contents > > 1 Substantive Errata <#substantive> > 2 Editorial Errata <#editorial> > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > > 1 Substantive Errata > > No substantive errata at present > > > 2 Editorial Errata > > > E01 > > Date Added: 2008-11-21 > > Summary: Note on using xml:id should reference Canonical XML 1.1 and > XML Signature, Second Edition. References should be updated. > > > Section *4.2, Policy Identification* > <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#Policy_Identification> > > 1. > > Replace the text of the second Note > > *Note:* > Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11 > <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#C14N11>] > is intended to address the issues that occur with Canonical > XML 1.0 with regards to xml:id. The W3C XML Security > Specifications Maintenance WG has been chartered to address > how to integrate Canonical XML 1.1 with XML Security, > including XML Signature [SecSpecMaintWG > <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#SecSpecMaintWG>] > (See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/.) > > with the following text: > > *Note:* > Note that is acceptable to sign a policy expression > identified using xml:id with XML SIgnature (Second Edition) > [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] and Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11], > as these recommendations address issues related to the use > of xml:id and xml:base. > > where XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link to a new reference > added to the document. > > > Appendix *B.2 Other References* > <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#Informative-References> > > 1. > > Update the reference to C14N11, as follows: > > Canonical XML 1.1, J. Boyer and G. Marcy Authors. W3C > Candidate Recommendation, 21 June 2007. This is a work in > progress. This version is available at > http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/CR-xml-c14n11-20070621.2 May 2008. > This version is available at > http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xml-c14n11-20080502. The > latest version of Canonical XML 1.1 is available at > http://www.w3.org/TR//xml-c14n11/. > > 2. > > Add a reference to XML Signature (Second Edition) after the > reference to [XMLSignature]: > > [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] XML Signature Syntax and > Processing, D. Eastlake, J. Reagle, D. Solo, F. Hirsch, and > T. Roessler Editors. W3C Recommendation, 10 June 2008. This > version of the XML Signature Syntax and Processing > Recommendation is > http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xmldsig-core-20080610/. The > latest version of XML-Signature Syntax and Processing is > available at http://www.w3.org/TR/xmldsig-core/. > > XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link target. Note the removal of > the hyphen in the title of the Second Edition. > > 3. > > Remove reference to XML Security Specifications Maintenance > Working Group, [SecSpecMaintWG], as the text that referenced it > has been removed as part of E01: > > [SecSpecMaintWG] XML Security Specifications Maintenance > Working Group , See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec. > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > W3C <http://www.w3.org/> > > > Web Services Policy 1.5 - Primer Errata > > > 21 November 2008 > > Latest version: > http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/7/primer-errata.html > Editors: > Asir S Vedamuthu, Microsoft Corporation > David Orchard, BEA Systems, Inc. > Frederick Hirsch, Nokia > Maryann Hondo, IBM Corporation > Prasad Yendluri, webMethods (A subsidiary of Software AG) > Toufic Boubez, Layer 7 Technologies > Ümit Yalçinalp, SAP AG. > > Last modified: $Date: 2007/09/25 03:43:31 $ > > Copyright <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Copyright> > (©) 2007 W3C <http://www.w3.org/>^® (MIT <http://www.csail.mit.edu/>, > ERCIM <http://www.ercim.org/>, Keio <http://www.keio.ac.jp/>), All > Rights Reserved. W3C liability > <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Legal_Disclaimer>, > trademark > <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#W3C_Trademarks> and > document use <http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/copyright-documents> > rules apply. > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > > Abstract > > This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy 1.5 > - Primer <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/> > Working Group Note ; for updates see the latest version of that document. > > The errata are numbered, classified as Substantive <#substantive> or > Editorial <#editorial>, and listed in reverse chronological order of > their date of publication in each category. > > Each entry has the following information: > > * A unique entry number > * The date it was added to the errata page. > * The section referred to. > * A description of the problem and correction if applicable. > Changes to the text of the spec are indicated thus: deleted > text, new text, modified text . > * A rationale for making the change (not required for editorial > errata). > > Changes to the text of the specification are indicated thus: new, > added text, modified text, and deleted text. > > The Working Group is tracking all comments via Bugzilla > <http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/buglist.cgi?query_format=advanced&short_desc_type=allwordssubstr&short_desc=&product=WS-Policy&component=Framework&component=Framework%2BAttachment&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BGuidelines&component=Framework%2BAttachment%2BPrimer> > and highly prefers to receive comments via this system. If access to > Bugzilla is not feasible, you may send your comments to the mailing > list public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org > <mailto:public-ws-policy-comments@w3.org> mailing list (public archive > <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-comments/>). > Each Bugzilla entry and email message should contain only one comment. > All comments on this specification should be made following the > Description for Issues <http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/#issues> of > the Working Group. It will be very helpful if you include the string > [WS-Policy-errata] in the subject line of your comment. > > > Status of this Document > > This document records all known errors in the Web Services Policy 1.5 > - Primer <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/> > Working Group Note that were known at the time of publication of this > document. > > > Table of Contents > > 1 Substantive Errata <#substantive> > 2 Editorial Errata <#editorial> > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > > 1 Substantive Errata > > No substantive errata at present > > > 2 Editorial Errata > > > E01 > > Date Added: 2008-11-21 > > Summary: Note on using xml:id should reference Canonical XML 1.1 and > XML Signature, Second Edition. References should be updated. > > > Section *2.10 Referencing Policy Expressions* > <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/#Referencing_Policy_Expressions> > > 1. > > Replace the text of the Note > > *Note:* > Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11 > <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#C14N11>] > is intended to address the issues that occur with Canonical > XML 1.0 with regards to xml:id. The W3C XML Security > Specifications Maintenance WG has been chartered to address > how to integrate Canonical XML 1.1 with XML Security, > including XML Signature [SecSpecMaintWG > <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904/#SecSpecMaintWG>] > (See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/.) > > with the following text: > > *Note:* > Note that is acceptable to sign a policy expression > identified using xml:id with XML SIgnature (Second Edition) > [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] and Canonical XML 1.1 [C14N11], > as these recommendations address issues related to the use > of xml:id and xml:base. > > where XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link to a new reference > added to the document. > > > Appendix *C References* > <http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/NOTE-ws-policy-primer-20071112/#references> > > 1. > > Update the reference to C14N11, as follows: > > Canonical XML 1.1, J. Boyer and G. Marcy Authors. W3C > Candidate Recommendation, 21 June 2007. This is a work in > progress. This version is available at > http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/CR-xml-c14n11-20070621.2 May 2008. > This version is available at > http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xml-c14n11-20080502. The > latest version of Canonical XML 1.1 is available at > http://www.w3.org/TR//xml-c14n11/. > > 2. > > Add a reference to XML Signature (Second Edition) after the > reference to [C14N11]: > > [XML-Signature-2ndEdition] XML Signature Syntax and > Processing, D. Eastlake, J. Reagle, D. Solo, F. Hirsch, and > T. Roessler Editors. W3C Recommendation, 10 June 2008. This > version of the XML Signature Syntax and Processing > Recommendation is > http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xmldsig-core-20080610/. The > latest version of XML-Signature Syntax and Processing is > available at http://www.w3.org/TR/xmldsig-core/. > > XML-Signature-2ndEdition is a link target. Note the removal of > the hyphen in the title of the Second Edition. > > 3. > > Remove reference to XML Security Specifications Maintenance > Working Group, [SecSpecMaintWG], as the text that referenced it > has been removed as part of E01: > > [SecSpecMaintWG] XML Security Specifications Maintenance > Working Group , See http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec. > >
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