NEW ISSUE: Better describe policy language capabilities in the Introduction

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3607

 

Title:

Better describe policy language capabilities in the Introduction

 

Description: 

I think one of the main goals of the WS-Policy Framework is to provide
policy evaluation capabilities i.e. to use the Framework constructs to
evaluate combinations of domain-specific policy assertions, nested
policies, etc.

 

The phrase "... assertions to be reasoned..." in the Introduction can be
improved to reflect this goal - see proposal. 

 

Justification:

Wordsmithing

 

Target: 

WS-Policy Framework 1.Introduction 

 

Proposal:

 

In 1.1 Introduction change from: 

"Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework provides a single policy language
to allow both kinds of assertions to be reasoned about in a consistent
manner."

 

To:

"Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework provides a single policy language
to allow both kinds of assertions to be expressed and evaluated in a
consistent manner."