[Bug 5041] Editorial change proposals for the guidelines document

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=5041

           Summary: Editorial change proposals for the guidelines document
           Product: WS-Policy
           Version: FPWD
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Windows XP
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Guidelines
        AssignedTo: fsasaki@w3.org
        ReportedBy: fsasaki@w3.org
         QAContact: public-ws-policy-qa@w3.org


Target: Guidelines

Description: Editorial change proposals for the guidelines document.

Sec. 1:
"Each policy alternative a collection of policy assertions." to
"Each policy alternative is a collection of policy assertions."
Sec. 5.1:
"and, a set of valid policy subjects" to
"and a set of valid policy subjects"
""Foo" has the same semantic " to
""Foo" has the same semantics "
Sec. 5.3.1:
"exactly one" to "ExactlyOne"
"all" to "All"
Sec. 5.5.1:
"compatability " to "compatibility"
Sec. 5.6.1 needs update with "outstanding AI" mentioned in editorial note, or
deletion of that note.
Sec. 6.1:
"The contents of the parameter are static and allows reuse in different
security scenerios" to
"The content of the parameter are static and allows reuse in different security
scenarios"
App. C:
Update reference to SWASDL to "W3C Recommendation 28 August 2007"

Felix

Received on Wednesday, 12 September 2007 15:39:40 UTC