2006/ws/policy ws-policy-guidelines.html,1.24,1.25

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@@ -828,7 +828,7 @@
 				policy assertions do not target wire-level behaviors but
 				rather abstract requirements, this technique does not apply. 
 				</p></div><div class="div2">
-<h3><a name="interrelated-domains"></a>4.8 Interrelated domains</h3><p>Domain authors need to be clear about how assertions defined in  
+<h3><a name="interrelated-domains"></a>4.8 Interrelated domains</h3><p>Assertion authors need to be clear about how assertions defined in  
 				their domain may fit with assertions for interrelated domains. A  
 				classic example of such an interrelated domain is security, because  
 				security tends to
@@ -836,9 +836,9 @@
 				of additional assertions
 				related to the interrelated security domain [<cite><a href="#WS-SecurityPolicy">WS-SecurityPolicy</a></cite>] in  
 				Web Services Reliable Messaging Policy
-				Assertions [<cite><a href="#WS-RM-Policy">Web Services Reliable Messaging Policy</a></cite>]. </p><p>Care should be taken to not duplicate existing  
-				assertions and also to make sure that new assertions are consistent  
-				with pre-existing assertions, when adding assertions related to an  
+				Assertions [<cite><a href="#WS-RM-Policy">Web Services Reliable Messaging Policy</a></cite>]. </p><p>Assertion authors should not duplicate existing  
+				assertions and should also make sure that when adding assertions those new assertions are consistent  
+				with pre-existing assertions of any  
 				interrelated domain. </p></div></div><div class="div1">
 <h2><a name="lifecycle"></a>5. Lifecycle of Assertions</h2><p>Assertion Authors need to consider not just the expression of the current set of requirements but
 		how they anticipate new assertions being added to the set.  There are three aspects that govern an assertions lifecycle:</p><ul><li><p> Assertion Extensibility </p></li><li><p> Policy Language Extensibility </p><p>Over time, the Policy WG or third parties can version or extend the Policy Language with new 

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