2006/ws/policy ws-policy-framework.xml,1.98,1.99

Update of /sources/public/2006/ws/policy
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv3266

Modified Files:
	ws-policy-framework.xml 
Log Message:
changes for action items 129, 130, 132 -editorial changes from Jan F2F

Index: ws-policy-framework.xml
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RCS file: /sources/public/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.98
retrieving revision 1.99
diff -u -d -r1.98 -r1.99
--- ws-policy-framework.xml	16 Jan 2007 22:09:00 -0000	1.98
+++ ws-policy-framework.xml	22 Jan 2007 14:22:28 -0000	1.99
@@ -86,16 +86,16 @@
             entities in a Web services-based system.
             </p>
 
-	    <p>A <termref def="policy">policy</termref> is a collection of policy alternatives,
-	    where a <termref def="policy_alternative">policy alternative </termref> is a collection of policy assertions.
+	    <p>A <termref def="policy">policy</termref> is a collection of policy alternatives. A
+	    <termref def="policy_alternative">policy alternative </termref> is a collection of policy assertions.
 		A <termref def="policy_assertion">policy assertion</termref> represents an individual requirement, capability, or other property of a behavior.  
-		A <termref def="policy_expression">policy expression</termref> is an XML Infoset representation of a policy, 
-		either in a normal form or in an equivalent compact form. Some policy assertions
+		A <termref def="policy_expression">policy expression</termref> is an XML Infoset representation of its policy, 
+		either in a normal form or in its equivalent compact form. Some policy assertions
 	    specify traditional requirements and capabilities that
-	    will ultimately manifest on the wire (e.g., authentication
+	    will manifest themselves in the messages exchanged(e.g., authentication
 	    scheme, transport protocol selection). Other policy
-	    assertions have no wire manifestation yet are critical to
-	    proper service selection and usage (e.g., privacy policy,
+	    assertions have no wire manifestation in the messages exchanged, yet are relevant to
+	    service selection and usage (e.g., privacy policy,
 	    QoS characteristics). &framework.title; provides a single policy
 	    language to allow both kinds of assertions to be expressed and evaluated 
 	    in a consistent manner.</p>
@@ -188,7 +188,7 @@
 	    </item>
 	    <item>
 	      <p>This document relies on the XML Information Set [<bibref
-	      ref="XMLInfoset"/>]. Information items properties are
+	      ref="XMLInfoset"/>]. Information item properties are
 	      indicated by the style <emph
 	      role="infoset-property">infoset property</emph>.</p>
 	    </item>
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@
                 >normative XML Schema</xspecref> [<bibref
                 ref="XMLSchemaPart1"/>, <bibref
                 ref="XMLSchemaPart2"/>] document can be obtained by
-                dereferencing the XML namespace URI.</p>
+                dereferencing the namespace document at the WS-Policy 1.5 namespace URI.</p>
                 
 	      <p>It is the intent of the W3C Web Services Policy Working Group that 
 	      the &framework.title; and &attachment.title; XML namespace URI will not change 
@@ -532,12 +532,6 @@
 	  Infoset representation; equivalent, alternative Infosets allow compactly
 	  expressing a policy through a number of constructs.</p>
 	  
-	  <p>This specification does not define processing for arbitrary <el>wsp:Policy</el>
-	  Element Information Items in any context other than as an Element Information Item
-	  in the <emph role="infoset-property">children</emph> property of an Element 
-	  Information Item that is in the <emph role="infoset-property">children</emph> 
-	  property of an element Information Item defined in section 4.1 below.    
-	  </p>
 
 	  <div2 id="Normal_Form_Policy_Expression">
 	    <head>Normal Form Policy Expression</head>
@@ -832,9 +826,17 @@
 <el>wsp:Policy</el> Element Information Items in the descendants
 of an assertion parameter, e.g., in the <emph
 role="infoset-property">children</emph> property of one of the <emph
-role="infoset-property">children</emph> as in
-<code>&lt;Lorem&gt;&lt;Ipsum&gt;&lt;wsp:Policy&gt; &hellip;
-&lt;/wsp:Policy&gt;&lt;/Ipsum&gt;&lt;/Lorem&gt;</code>.</p>
+role="infoset-property">children</emph> as in:
+<eg>
+(01)&lt;wsp:Policy&gt;
+(02)   &lt;Lorem&gt;
+(03)       &lt;Ipsum&gt;
+(04)           &lt;wsp:Policy&gt; 
+(05)           &hellip;
+(06)           &lt;/wsp:Policy&gt;
+(07)       &lt;/Ipsum&gt;
+(08)   &lt;/Lorem&gt;
+(09)&lt;/wsp:Policy&gt;</eg>.</p>
 </def>
 </gitem>
 </glist>
@@ -2365,6 +2367,27 @@
                             <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/115">115 </loc>
                            Resolution for issue  <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4210">4210</loc></td>
 					</tr>
+                <tr>
+						<td>20070121</td>
+						<td>MH</td>
+						<td>Completed action item:
+                            <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/129">129</loc>
+                           Resolution for namespace dereferencing issue <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4204">4204</loc></td>
+					</tr>
+					<tr>
+						<td>20070121</td>
+						<td>MH</td>
+						<td>Completed action item:
+                            <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/130">130</loc>
+                           Resolution for editorial issues  <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4205">4205</loc></td>
+					</tr>
+					<tr>
+						<td>20070121</td>
+						<td>MH</td>
+						<td>Completed action item:
+                            <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/132">132</loc>
+                           Resolution for changing format of example and removing text. <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4224">4224</loc></td>
+					</tr>
                 </tbody>
             </table>
         </inform-div1>

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