per my action item

http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/77


I have started but not completed the action and I know both Umit & Fred 
have input on this. So, although this may be out of the norm....I checked 
the file in.
I'm asking that you review the proposed edits I've made here, to see if 
you agree with the direction of my edits.

Thanks for your indulgence.

Maryann