2006/ws/policy ws-policy-guidelines.html,1.12,1.13 ws-policy-guidelines.xml,1.21,1.22

Update of /sources/public/2006/ws/policy
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Modified Files:
	ws-policy-guidelines.html ws-policy-guidelines.xml 
Log Message:
Editorial revision: completed missing parts of editorial action 96 after editorial reviews by co-editors.


Index: ws-policy-guidelines.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-guidelines.html,v
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retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -d -r1.12 -r1.13
--- ws-policy-guidelines.html	20 Dec 2006 06:24:20 -0000	1.12
+++ ws-policy-guidelines.html	20 Dec 2006 19:52:22 -0000	1.13
@@ -78,8 +78,7 @@
         guidelines on the use of Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework and
         Web Services Policy 1.5 - Attachment specifications to create and use domain specific
         assertions to enable interoperability.
-        </p><p>WS-Policy Assertions are XML expressions
-        that communicate the requirements and capabilities of a web
+        </p><p>WS-Policy Assertions communicate the requirements and capabilities of a web
         service by adhering to the specification, WS-Policy Framework. To enable interoperability of web
         services different sets of WS-Policy Assertions need to be
         defined by different communities based upon domain-specific requirements of
@@ -246,7 +245,8 @@
 				expressed in a WS-Policy document and modifying their own
       			configurations dynamically.
         		</p></div><div class="div3">
-<h4><a name="providers"></a>3.1.3 Providers</h4><p>A provider of WS-Policy Assertions can be any web service implementation that can
+<h4><a name="providers"></a>3.1.3 Providers</h4><p>A provider who expresses capabilities and requirements of a Web service
+				as policies can be any web service implementation that can
 	   			specify its on-the-wire message behavior as a policy
 				expression that conforms to the Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework [<cite><a href="#WS-Policy">Web Services Policy Framework</a></cite>]
 				and Web Services Policy 1.5 - Attachment [<cite><a href="#WS-PolicyAttachment">Web Services Policy Attachment</a></cite>] specifications.
@@ -1227,4 +1227,7 @@
 						</td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20061219</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">TIB</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">Editorial revision: most parts of editorial action
 							<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/96">96</a>.
 							Remaining editorials to be reviewed.
+						</td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20061220</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">TIB</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">Editorial revision: completed missing parts of editorial action
+							<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/96">96</a>
+							after editorial reviews by co-editors.
 						</td></tr></tbody></table><br></div></div></body></html>
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Index: ws-policy-guidelines.xml
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RCS file: /sources/public/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-guidelines.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.21
retrieving revision 1.22
diff -u -d -r1.21 -r1.22
--- ws-policy-guidelines.xml	20 Dec 2006 06:24:20 -0000	1.21
+++ ws-policy-guidelines.xml	20 Dec 2006 19:52:22 -0000	1.22
@@ -98,8 +98,7 @@
         &attachment.title; specifications to create and use domain specific
         assertions to enable interoperability.
         </p>
-	    <p>WS-Policy Assertions are XML expressions
-        that communicate the requirements and capabilities of a web
+	    <p>WS-Policy Assertions communicate the requirements and capabilities of a web
         service by adhering to the specification, WS-Policy Framework. To enable interoperability of web
         services different sets of WS-Policy Assertions need to be
         defined by different communities based upon domain-specific requirements of
@@ -360,7 +359,8 @@
 				</div3>
 				<div3 id="providers">
 				<head>Providers</head>
-				<p>A provider of WS-Policy Assertions can be any web service implementation that can
+				<p>A provider who expresses capabilities and requirements of a Web service
+				as policies can be any web service implementation that can
 	   			specify its on-the-wire message behavior as a policy
 				expression that conforms to the Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework [<bibref ref="WS-Policy"/>]
 				and Web Services Policy 1.5 - Attachment [<bibref ref="WS-PolicyAttachment"/>] specifications.
@@ -1865,6 +1865,14 @@
 							Remaining editorials to be reviewed.
 						</td>
 					</tr>
+					<tr>
+						<td>20061220</td>
+						<td>TIB</td>
+						<td>Editorial revision: completed missing parts of editorial action
+							<loc href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/96">96</loc>
+							after editorial reviews by co-editors.
+						</td>
+					</tr>
 				</tbody>
 			</table>
 		</inform-div1>

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