Re: Comment on Web Services Description Language (WSDL) Version 2.0 Part 0: Primer

On 5/10/07, Innovimax SARL <innovimax@gmail.com> wrote:
> Great !
>
> The reference have not been fully corrected
>
> And I see new ones in all the specs
>
> [[
> [IETF RFC 3023]
>     "XML Media Types", M. Murata, S. St. Laurent, D. Kohn, Authors.
> Internet Engineering Task Force, January 2001. Available at
> http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3023.txt.
> ]]
>
> [[
> [XLink 1.0]
>     XLink 1.0 Steve DeRose, Eve Maler, David Orchard, Editors. World
> Wide Web Consortium, 27 June 2001. This version of the XLink
> Recommendation is http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/REC-xlink-20010627/ The
> latest version of XLink is available at http://www.w3.org/TR/xlink/.
> ]]
>
> [[
> [XForms 1.0]
>     XForms 1.0 (Second Edition), M. Dubinko, et al., Editors. World
> Wide Web Consortium, 14 March 2006. This version of the XForms 1.0
> Recommendation is http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-xforms-20060314/. The
> latest version of XForms 1.0 is available at
> http://www.w3.org/TR/xforms/.
> ]]
>
> [[
> [SOAP12 Part 1]
>     SOAP Version 1.2 Part 1: Messaging Framework (Second Edition), M.
> Gudgin, M. Hadley, N. Mendelsohn, J-J. Moreau, H. Frystyk Nielsen,
> Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, 27 April 2007. This version of the
> "SOAP Version 1.2 Part 1: Messaging Framework" Recommendation is
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-soap12-part1-20070427/. The latest
> version of "SOAP Version 1.2 Part 1: Messaging Framework" is available
> at http://www.w3.org/TR/soap12-part1/.
> ]]
>
> In http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-soap11-binding.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#References
>
> Reference to XSD Structures and XSD Datatypes are not to last version
> (second edition)
>
>
> But now some information in the text are to be revised
>
> In http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-primer.html
>
> [[
> 1.1 Prerequisites
>
> This primer assumes that the reader has the following prerequisite knowledge:
>     * familiarity with XML (Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0
> (Second Edition) [XML 1.0], XML Information Set [XML Information Set])
> and XML Namespaces (Namespaces in XML [XML Namespaces]);
>     * some familiarity with XML Schema (XML Schema Part 1: Structures
> [XML Schema: Structures] XML Schema Part 2: Datatypes [XML Schema:
> Datatypes]);
>     * familiarity with basic Web services concepts such as Web
> service, client, and the purpose and function of a Web service
> description. (For an explanation of basic Web services concepts, see
> Web Services Architecture [WS Architecture] Section 1.4 and Web
> Services Glossary [WS Glossary] glossary. However, note the Web
> Services Architecture document uses the slightly more precise terms
> "requester agent" and "provider agent" instead of the terms "client"
> and "Web service" used in this primer.)
>
> No previous experience with WSDL is assumed.
> ]]
>
> I propose to remove " (Second Edition)"
>
> Mohamed ZERGAOUI
> Innovimax AC Rep
>
>
> On 5/10/07, Jonathan Marsh <jonathan@wso2.com> wrote:
> > Thank you for this issue.  We tracked it as Issue 4427 [1] in our short Last Call period.  The Working Group endeavored to correct all the bib references in all the specs [2,3,4,5,6].
> >
> > The spec should be in Proposed Recommendation shortly, if you disagree with the resolution of this issue please inform us as soon as possible.
> >
> > [1] http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4457
> > [2] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-primer.html
> > [3] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
> > [4] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-adjuncts.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
> > [5] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-soap11-binding.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
> > [6] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-rdf.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
> >
> > Jonathan Marsh - http://www.wso2.com - http://auburnmarshes.spaces.live.com
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: public-ws-desc-comments-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-desc-
> > > comments-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Innovimax SARL
> > > Sent: Sunday, April 08, 2007 12:49 PM
> > > To: public-ws-desc-comments@w3.org
> > > Subject: Comment on Web Services Description Language (WSDL) Version
> > > 2.0 Part 0: Primer
> > >
> > >
> > > Please find below listed a lot of errors in the References
> > >
> > > Please note also that errors could also be found in other part of the
> > > spec
> > > * WSDL 2.0 Core
> > > * WSDL 2.0 Adjuncts
> > > * WSDL 2.0 SOAP 1.1 Binding
> > > * WSDL 2.0 RDF Mapping
> > >
> > > Best regards,
> > >
> > > Mohamed ZERGAOUI
> > > Innovimax AC Rep
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > In Web Services Description Language (WSDL) Version 2.0 Part 0: Primer
> > > W3C Working Draft 26 March 2007
> > > http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-wsdl20-primer-20070326
> > >
> > > Normative Reference :
> > >
> > > "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels, S. Bradner,
> > > Author. Internet Engineering Task Force, March 1997. Available at
> > > http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt."
> > > instead of
> > > "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels, S. Bradner,
> > > Author. Internet Engineering Task Force, June 1999. Available at
> > > http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt."
> > >
> > > [[
> > > [IETF RFC 3023]
> > >      XML Media Types", M. Murata, S. St. Laurent, D. Kohn, Authors.
> > > Internet Engineering Task Force, January 2001. Available at
> > > http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3023.txt.
> > > ]]
> > > instead of
> > > [[
> > > [RFC 3023]
> > >     IETF "RFC 3023: XML Media Types", M. Murata, S. St. Laurent, D.
> > > Kohn, July 1998.(Seehttp://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3023.txt.)
> > > ]]
> > >
> > > XML (Fourth Edition) instead of (third)
> > > Namespaces in XML 1.0 (Second Edition) instead of Namespace in XML
> > > XML Schema Part 1: Structures Second Edition instead of XML Schema
> > > Part 1: Structure
> > > XML Schema Part 2: Datatypes Second Edition instead of XML Schema Part
> > > 2: Datatypes
> > >
> > > In Informative Reference
> > >
> > > "XPointer Framework, Paul Grosso, Eve Maler, Jonathan Marsh, Norman
> > > Walsh, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, 25 March 2003"
> > > instead of
> > > "XPointer Framework,Paul Grosso, Eve Maler, Jonathan Marsh, Norman
> > > Walsh, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, 22 November 2002."
> > >
> > > "XML Schema Versioning Use Cases, Hoylen Sue. W3C XML Schema Working
> > > Group Draft, 31 January 2006. Available at
> > > http://www.w3.org/XML/2005/xsd-versioning-use-cases/"
> > > instead of
> > > "XML Schema Versioning Use Cases , Hoylen Sue. W3C XML Schema Working
> > > Group Draft, 15 April 2005. Available at
> > > http://www.w3.org/XML/2005/xsd-versioning-use-cases/"
> > >
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