RE: Suggested editorial changes for IRI and Multipart styles

Thanks for your comment.  The WS Description Working Group tracked this
issue as a CR075 [1].

 

The Working Group accepted your proposals to split the assertions, including
also the last bullet in 4.2, and reword the suggestions using "Note, ..."
and "may" so they aren't assertions any more.  This change is reflected in
the latest editor’s draft [2, 3].

 

Unless you let us know otherwise by the end of October, we will assume you
agree with the resolution of this issue.

 

[1] http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/desc/5/cr-issues/issues.html#CR075 

[2]
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-adjuncts.html
?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#_operation_iri_style

[3]
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-adjuncts.html
?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#_operation_multipart_style

 

Jonathan Marsh -  <http://www.wso2.com> http://www.wso2.com -
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From: www-ws-desc-request@w3.org [mailto:www-ws-desc-request@w3.org] On
Behalf Of Lawrence Mandel
Sent: Tuesday, July 11, 2006 8:48 PM
To: www-ws-desc@w3.org
Subject: Suggested editorial changes for IRI and Multipart styles

 


I have two editorial changes (again that are not meant to change the meaning
of the statements) that I'd like to recommend for the IRI and Multipart
style sections of the WSDL adjuncts. I identified these proposed changes
while creating tests for the test suite. I've attached a patch that contains
my suggested changes. 

Section 4.2 

1. "The sequence MUST contain only local element children. These child
elements MAY contain the nillable attribute." 

This assertion contains both an assertion and a suggestion. I suggest
splitting the assertion and suggestion. 

"The sequence MUST contain only local element children." "These child
elements MAY contain the nillable attribute." 

Section 4.3 

2. "The sequence MUST contain only local element children. These child
elements MAY contain the nillable attribute, and the attributes minOccurs
and maxOccurs MUST have a value 1.
<http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/%7Echeckout%7E/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-adjuncts
.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#MultipartStyle-5081-summary> †
" 

This assertion contains 2 assertions and a suggestion. I suggest splitting
the assertions and suggestion. 

"The sequence MUST contain only local element children." These child
elements MAY contain the nillable attribute." "The attributes minOccurs and
maxOccurs MUST have a value 1 for these child elements".
<http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/%7Echeckout%7E/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-adjuncts
.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#MultipartStyle-5081-summary> †


Thanks, 

Lawrence Mandel

Software Developer
IBM Rational Software
Phone: 905 - 413 - 3814   Fax: 905 - 413 - 4920
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