- From: Al Gilman <asgilman@iamdigex.net>
- Date: Tue, 31 Dec 2002 14:50:14 -0500
- To: WS Description Requirements Last Call Comments <public-ws-desc-comments@w3.org>
- Cc: wai-liaison@w3.org
<notes class="inTransmittal"> These comments were developed in the Protocols and Formats working group. They have had some of the rough edges knocked off them in that process, but are certainly open to clarification and refinement. We don't claim to have absorbed all the context for the current document completely. If there is anything in these comments which is not clear, or appears to be un-implementable, we would welcome the opportunity to discuss these points with you before you make a final determination on a disposition. Thank you for your consideration of these comments. Al -- Al Gilman, Chair W3C/WAI Protocols and Formats Working Group </notes> A: Introduction Thank you for developing this aspect of web services carefully, including inviting comments on this draft. The over-arching accessibility requirement has to do with how well the information representations flowing in and out of web services are characterized to clients of the service. It is necessary that all potential or partial obstacles to the effective receipt and use of the information in these messages by a human end-user be identified and the means of remedying these be articulated. A downstream adaptation transcoder[DI] needs to be able to reason about the accessibility of the content of Web Service messages. It may need to reflow and re-style the dialog to maximize usability based on the device and user capabilities in the current (a particular) delivery context. The information needed to decide the optimum adaptive transformation should be present (in the service messages processed in the context of their description) in machinable form, and the service messages should be constructed in a way that makes the implementation of this adaptation processor easy. This class of client must be included in assessing R013, easy to implement. While many of the requirements of the XAG are present already in the Web Service Description requirements, We believe that incorporating some more concrete provisions in various areas as expressed in the current draft XML Accessibility Guidelines [XAG] into the climate of decision factors for Web Services Description will yield a more effective and interoperable cohort of web services and a more accessible web. B: General comments 1. The role of web service description in an accessible-by-construction Web. The description of a web service bears a role in building an accessible-by-construction Web similar to the Model in an XForms application[XForms] or the UI Socket in an AIAP-URC application[AIAP-RC]. It documents the usage practiced in the messages that accomplish service delivery by that service. It must prepare a client for what structures and properties to anticipate in these messages, and what interpretation to lay upon those structures and properties when they appear. The requirements for accessibility that get reflected to web services, whether one speaks of accessibility by people with disabilities or universal design for accessibility regardless of disability, are that the properties such as being a non-text object (cf. Guideline 1 in [WCAG1, WCAG2]) affecting such accessibility be captured in this model (cf. Guideline 1 in [XAG]), and documented in the description (cf. Guideline 4 in [XAG]), along with the structures that capture the substitutability opportunities between these objects and their equivalent alternatives (cf. html:object, smil:switch, svg:desc). These are specific modes of information capture and exposure that support required reasoning about services in the downstream process of adapting user interfaces dealing with information accepted and provided by these services to accommodate human diversity, in particular to meet the needs of people with disabilities. The Web Service Usage Scenarios Document talks about requirements arising from reasoning about services and in order to construct competent consumers (clients, communication partners) of the service. In our case, each of those implies the other. To adapt the presentation of a bottom-line service that a human cares about, the service process must be presented in an interface free of critical dependencies on particular human functions such as vision, hearing, moving a mouse; as well as human performance factors such as concurrent mechanical actions, rapid response, etc. To work around sight dependencies implicit in images used as icons, equivalence relationships between these icons and text [and possibly sound] equivalents must be defined and exposed in a way that a client of the web service can comprehend in a machine process for automatic adaptation. Methods of classifying and relating content fragments, and characterizing user factors for use in the adaptation process will continue to evolve. Particularly, we expect progress in these areas to come from the W3C Activities addressing multi-modal interaction[MMI] and Device Independence[DI]. This will be ongoing as the work on web services progresses. But the general outline of strategies to apply to web services are already sketched in the XAG to a more developed degree than is present in this draft of Web Service Description Requirements. 2. Instance requirements drive format requirements. This document addresses requirements for a web service description notation. Not a web service description practice. Requirements that pertain to the description of each web service, but not to the notation in which one can write all web service descriptions, are not covered here. This makes it awkward to assert that accessibility concerns are being adequately addressed; as the most obvious form of accessibility requirements are claims against the specific description of a particular web service. The notation then must provide feasible and convenient means for description instances to meet those requirements. In the Web Accessibility Initiative, we have instance requirements represented by the Web Content Accessibility Guidelines [WCAG1, WCAG2] and the User Agent Accessibility Guidelines [UAAG1] and platform requirements represented by the Authoring Tool Accessibility Guidelines [ATAG1] and the XML (dialect) Accessibility Guidelines [XAG]. There is an open question as to whether the document set for Web Services as presently planned is complete, or whether the Web Services document set should include a Service Description Guidelines document capturing requirements on description instances that cannot be guaranteed to be satisfied by the built-in semantics bound to the descriptive medium alone. 3. Extension vs. Interoperation. The area of "information integrity of extensions" is under-developed. There need to be more requirements laid out for any extension capability or this descriptive notation will be too-easily abused to create private i.e. un-interoperable service interfaces. Understand that for accessibility, anything that the service offeror has a desire to publish in the service description is something that we probably need to reason about. So while R070 -- that a mapping to the RDF model can be introduced -- is necessary, it is not sufficient. Anything that could be reasoned about in the sense of the service description should be captured and exposed in a machine-recognizable and machine-reasonable way. Compare with Guidelines 2 and 4 in [XAG] -- have a model, export the model. "Export" here means to share the model in machinable form. This requirement for a machine comprehensible rationalization of the service behavior applies to the description including all extensions. You may wish to restrict extensions to run-time information, or at least set as a PR-entry requirement that it be demonstrated [one reference implementation here, not two competing] that there is a way, given a suitable programming model, to process all allowed extension contents interpretively and extract the full sense of the service characteristics described using the extension. 4. Interoperation Testbed. We are aware of research and government activities [US-WS-WG, IRIS, RAINBOW] who a) want to use web services to migrate their operations to a more cost-effective platform, and b) want to implement accessible-by-construction services and/or accessibility-aiding transformation services. The essence of Web Service pilot and prototype efforts is to evaluate the interoperation of service and client prototypes implemented by different organizations. How can we and they participate with you in inter-prototype operability evaluation on an ongoing basis? 5. Conformance. There is enough intrinsic complexity latent in the extensibility requirements so that conformance to the resulting specification may indeed be less than simple. Our experience has been that success in gaining compliance is directly related to the clarity of the conformance requirements. Where these cannot be stated in a way that is terse and correct at the same time, it helps to be prolix but concrete. Please consider whether the document(s) should not include a conformance section. If there is no such guidance in the specification, we would be concerned that Web Service descriptions using this technology will often not meet the requirements of XAG Checkpoint 4.6, 4.8 -- document how you meet accessibility requirements. C: Comments on specific numbered Requirements 1. [R001 any transport protocol] Demonstrate that the technology works in particular for services with ports that source and sink streams. There are application scenarios for services that assist in adapting real time collaboration for people with disabilities that would seem to call for web services that have ports that source and sink streams[MODTRANS]. This requirement would seem to imply that such services will be covered, but it is not clear that unless the applicability to stream ports is confirmed concretely, that the resulting specification will be sufficient for this use. How would the Web Services Description Working Group best like to follow up on this? Should there be an additional "in particular" numbered requirement, some sort of a coverage requirement attached to this requirements, or what? Notes: [Section 4.4 Interactions] This section casts doubt on the capability of the result to deal with streams. Web services should include stream processors. [R114 unambiguous unique Operation for any message] It is not clear what is actually required here; "must allow" is ambiguous. Do you mean that for all services, the information in the Web Service Description must be sufficient to resolve the myOperation property of any particular message to one and only one defined Operation? Or do you mean that the Web Service Description specification(s) must define mechanisms such that if that uniqueness property is appropriate, the service can provide description which consumers of the service to identify the unique value of myOperation for each message. If the former, this requirement may be incompatible with stream-processing services (and if so should be relaxed). 2. [R004 XML Infoset model] It is not clear to us that this is sufficiently broad or powerful where it comes to describing external relationships of a service. This may be fine for describing the internal workings (messages, and their parts) of a binding, but that relationships across bindings and with external information may be better, or necessarily, expressed in some more general framework such as the RDF Model. 3. [R100 type system extensibility] See the general comment 3 on the issues raised by the current description of extensibility in the requirements. 4. [R003 use available] [cf. XAG Checkpoint 2.9] It would be helpful to have some rough idea, while not necessarily a closed or definitive list, of the working hypotheses of the WS Description Group as to what these established foundation technologies are. WCAG 2.0 Checkpoint 5.2 (backward compatibility)[WCAG2.C5.2] points out that it takes time for assistive technologies to adapt to new technologies, and that existing support through assistive technologies (such as screen readers and screen magnifiers, voice command and on-screen keyboards) should be considered in assessing what constitutes "commodity technology." 5. [R013 simple to understand and implement correctly] It is hard to reconcile the use of MUST in this clause, where MUST is applied to an unenforceably vague predicate. 6. [R021 describe the messages] Essentially the whole of the XAG as now drafted serves as an accessibility annex to this one-liner. This is the point where this document implicitly creates a requirement for WSDL to satisfy the provisions of the XAG. 7. [R021 describe the messages] [R003 use available] In particular, there may be assertions that one can make about elements of a given service that have not been anticipated in the general syntax for all services, and that can be conveniently expressed as RDF metadata embedded in the service description after the manner employed in SVG and SRGS. 8. [R116 abstract policies] Is there any reason why this should not be required to be expressed in a form reducible to the RDF model [or more specifically DAML+OIL]? Otherwise there is no definition to what one considers an 'abstract policy.' See also general comment 3. 9. [R083 separate design-time from run-time information] What is intended by the "design time" referred to in this requirement? This requirement is incompatible with R001 (any programming model). It is not possible to distinguish design time and run time without making assumptions about the programming model. Is "design time" the activity in which one is designing a service wrapper to embed the service in an API accessible from programs on the [network-] client node? Is it presumed that all services require human intervention to create such a wrapper? What is the standard for determining design time information -- the maximum set of constraints that can be bound in hard code, or the minimum amount of code that must be hand-crafted? 10. [R026 Human-readable comments.][R123 unconstrained comment content] This requirement is important, but inadequately specified. The human-readable expression of what the formal structures in the service messages etc. are about must be captured in a little more formal form than what is provided by, for example, XML comments. The XAG requirement (Checkpoint 4.4) for _explicit_ documentation requires that the human-readable documentation of the schema is formally connected with the [items in the infoset]. The 'annotation' construct in XML Schema meets this requirement. Comments in XML DTDs do not. Please capture this distinction into the WSD Requirements. Make the WSDL be a literate programming medium where the formal code that expresses what the immediate processors of the message need and the narrative explanation that expresses what this means for the beneficial users of the expressed information are related as tightly as possible by the structure and other markup of the WSDL document. D: References [XAG] http://www.w3.org/TR/xag [XForms] http://www.w3.org/MarkUp/Forms/ [AIAP-RC] http://www.incits.org/tc_home/v2htm/docs/V2/02-0086/v2020086.htm [WCAG1] http://www.w3.org/TR/WCAG10 [WCAG2] http://www.w3.org/TR/WCAG20 [MMI] http://www.w3.org/2002/mmi/ [DI] http://www.w3.org/2001/di/ [ATAG1] http://www.w3.org/TR/ATAG10 [US-WS-WG] http://web-services.gov/ [IRIS] http://www.iris-design4all.org/default.htm [RAINBOW] http://rainbow.essi.fr/ [MODTRANS] http://trace.wisc.edu/world/modtrans/
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