Issue 3843: Minor updates

• From: Monica J. Martin <Monica.Martin@Sun.COM>
• Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2007 11:05:19 -0800
• To: Gary Brown <gary@pi4tech.com>
• Cc: WS-Choreography List <public-ws-chor@w3.org>
• Message-id: <45D20BEF.60902@sun.com>

Gary,
Reviewing the proposal [1] for Issue 3843 [2], minor corrections are 
suggested for Section 5.7 Choreography Lifeline:

    3rd para:
    From
    "A choreography is initiated, establishing a collaboration when an
    interaction, explicitly marked as an /choreography initiator/, is
    performed"

    To
    "A choreography session is initiated, establishing a new collaboration
    between participants, upon the occurrence of the first interaction in
    the flow which BEGINS at the root choreography."

    4th para:
    From
    "Two or more interactions MAY be marked as choreography initiators,
    indicating alternatives for establishing a collaboration"
    To
    "Two or more interactions MAY [delete "be"] cause a choreography
    session to be
    initiated, if they represent alternate flow paths from the root
    choreography."

Thanks.

[1] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-chor/2006Dec/0021.html
[2] http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3843

Received on Tuesday, 13 February 2007 19:05:39 UTC