- From: Monica J. Martin <Monica.Martin@Sun.COM>
- Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2007 11:05:19 -0800
- To: Gary Brown <gary@pi4tech.com>
- Cc: WS-Choreography List <public-ws-chor@w3.org>
Gary, Reviewing the proposal [1] for Issue 3843 [2], minor corrections are suggested for Section 5.7 Choreography Lifeline: 3rd para: From "A choreography is initiated, establishing a collaboration when an interaction, explicitly marked as an /choreography initiator/, is performed" To "A choreography session is initiated, establishing a new collaboration between participants, upon the occurrence of the first interaction in the flow which BEGINS at the root choreography." 4th para: From "Two or more interactions MAY be marked as choreography initiators, indicating alternatives for establishing a collaboration" To "Two or more interactions MAY [delete "be"] cause a choreography session to be initiated, if they represent alternate flow paths from the root choreography." Thanks. [1] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-chor/2006Dec/0021.html [2] http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3843
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