RE: Issue 3843 proposed changes

Minor typo in 4th para proposal "...interactions MAY be cause a choreography..."
Otherwise looks good to me.

Martin.

>-----Original Message-----
>From: public-ws-chor-request@w3.org 
>[mailto:public-ws-chor-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Gary Brown
>Sent: Monday, December 18, 2006 5:25 PM
>To: WS-Choreography List
>Subject: Issue 3843 proposed changes
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>Additional proposed changes for
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>	Issue: Redundant 'initiate' flag on interaction
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>http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3843
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>Section 5.7 Choreography Lifeline
>
>3rd para:
>From
>"A choreography is initiated, establishing a collaboration when an 
>interaction, explicitly marked as an /choreography initiator/, 
>is performed"
>
>To
>"A choreography session is initiated, establishing a new collaboration 
>between participants, upon the occurrence of the first interaction in 
>the flow which beings at the root choreography."
>
>
>4th para:
>From
>"Two or more interactions MAY be marked as choreography initiators, 
>indicating alternatives for establishing a collaboration"
>To
>"Two or more interactions MAY be cause a choreography session to be 
>initiated, if they represent alternate flow paths from the root 
>choreography."
>
>5th para:
>Delete
>"A choreography initiator interaction MAY be defined within a root 
>choreography or within an enclosed choreography. In either case the 
>collaboration is established when the first choreography initiator 
>interaction is performed."
>
>
>This caters for all uses of the term "initiator" in the current 
>specification.
>
>Regards
>Gary
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Received on Monday, 18 December 2006 18:37:39 UTC