- From: Gary Brown <gary@pi4tech.com>
- Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 13:01:48 +0100
- To: Steve Ross-Talbot <steve@pi4tech.com>
- CC: 'WS-Choreography List' <public-ws-chor@w3.org>
Hi Comments up to and including 4.1.2.1: I have not listed any of the typos, as I think these will be tackled when polishing. Section 4 Need to see timer examples before deciding whether showing timer or buyer side would be productive? Section 4.1.2.1 In the text it says that the condition checked is "barteringDone = false" in the repeat condition, the WS-CDL uses a guard condition "barteringDone = true" (with repeat condition of "true"), while the pseudo code indicates a repeat until "barteringDone = true". These three places need to be consistent - probably matching the pseudo code, so having a guard condition of "true" with a repeat condition of "barteringDone = false". - at the moment I think the CDL is inverted anyway, as it is checking whether barteringDone is true in the guard, when it has just been initialized to false, so it would be skipped. Also in the initial text for this section it talks about the choice having a 'silentAction', but this is not in the example, and I think would be better left out of this example and the functionality covered in the later timer section. Regards Gary Steve Ross-Talbot wrote: > > http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-archive/2006Apr/0006.html > > Cheers > > Steve T > > > > >
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