RE: pdf - WS Choreography Description Language, Version 1 (Edit or's Draft)

Hi Nick, Hi all,

I finally got a chance to read the draft again. Attached please find my comments.

I am certainly grateful to the great work Nick has put into this draft. As a deliverable of the working group, I feel we still need a lot of editing work to make the spec more precise. In general, the draft reads more like a technical journal paper than a standard specification.  Choreography defines interfaces among different participants, precision and un-ambiguity of the specification is ultimately important. I feel it's really necessary to follow the WSDL2.0 model and rewrite the spec using XML infoset.

Best Regards,
Kevin
 

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From: public-ws-chor-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-chor-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Jeff Mischkinsky
Sent: Monday, Mar 01, 2004 06:11 AM
To: public-ws-chor@w3.org
Subject: Re: pdf - WS Choreography Description Language, Version 1 (Editor's Draft)



Hi,
   Here's the pdf version:

http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-archive/2004Mar/0002.html

cheers,
jeff

At 03:29 AM 3/1/2004, Greg Ritzinger wrote:

>The current thinking on the ws-choreography description language can be
>found at the following URL:
>
>http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-archive/2004Mar/0001.html
>
>Nick / Greg

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