- From: Charlton Barreto <charlton_b@mac.com>
- Date: Tue, 7 Dec 2004 12:17:20 -0800
- To: public-ws-chor@w3.org
From the Dec 03 draft: Section 2.5.3, lines 32-35: "The perform activity enables a Choreography to specify than another Choreography is performed at this point in its definition, as an enclosed Choreography." Can we change this to, "The perform activity enables a Choreography to specify that another, enclosed Choreography, is performed at this point in its definition." Section 7 We should move Section 7, "Conformance", to Section 8 (sliding all subsequent sections one section #), and add the following for Section 7: "7 Relationship with Addressing The WS-Addressing specification [28] provides transport-neutral mechanisms to address Web services and messages, specifically, XML [XML 1.0, XML Namespaces] elements to identify Web service endpoints and to secure end-to-end endpoint identification in messages. WS-Addressing enables messaging systems to support message transmission through networks that include processing nodes such as endpoint managers, firewalls, and gateways in a transport-neutral manner. WS-Addressing can be used to convey the reference and correlation information for normalizing expanded channelVariable information into an uniform format that can be processed independently of transport or application." Section 10 In the new Section 10, "References" (formerly Section 9), we should add: "[28] Web Services Addressing (WS-Addressing) - W3C Member Submission 10 August 2004" More editorial comments are forthcoming.... -Charlton.
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