- From: Monica J. Martin <Monica.Martin@Sun.COM>
- Date: Tue, 13 Apr 2004 13:48:36 -0600
- To: WS-Choreography List <public-ws-chor@w3.org>
In line with your request for comments on the draft specification see below: These comments have been mapped against previous comments to verify what changes have been made. Thanks. Editorial: 1. bpel4ws is the proprietary version of WS-BPEL. We shouldn't use this terminology. 2. The same applies to WS-Security. Specify WS-BPEL and OASIS WS-Security. Substantive: Figure 1 As indicated 16 March 2004, no mention is made on looking at application integration and the value of that in the enterprise. There could be several domains of control within a logical enterprise. Section 2.1 1. No explicit references provided for abstract and concrete (see F2F March 2004). See Tony Fletcher's comments as well and mine from 16 March 2004 (should be logged in Bugzilla). Section 2.2.1 and 2.4.6.1 Import Can we assume that all the constraints, parameters, etc. are overwritten. What dictates that? What about local variables that exist in the including choreography, are they always considered the master? Concerns relate to all of Section 2.4.6. Section 2.2.1 The design assumes that the package elements (anything in the package) has visibility to other elements. That may not be true. These are business semantics that candictate visibility and provide that information to a choreography. Section 2.3.4 Clarify that the reference with support from tokens, token types, etc. are statically defined but dynamically bound. This is clear from the confusion in WS-BPEL, and we should be clear of the functions we describe and use. Section 2.4.2 1. At the end of this section, you indicate that if roles are not declared with a Role, that the variables apply to the relationship of which a role could have been declared. How do these assumptions impact your premises on important and performed choreographies? Without explicitness, many assumptions could apply: Apply a Relationship R, error occurred, role was incorrectly specified, etc. Concerns relate to all of Section 2.4.6. Section 2.4.8 Need to address concerns on 2.4.6 before assessing against functions described in this section. As I did 16 March, I still would recommend we define faults or errors under exceptional conditions. We are really not addressing business exceptions. This may create user community confusion. Section 2.5.3 1. Please more clearly differentiate a performed choreography vs. an imported definition, as the former could be defined outside of the enclosing choreography or package. This in essence is an import. 2. As it relates to enclosing choreographies, what overrides are allowed if at all. What happens if conditions, parameters, constraints conflict? (relates to assumptions for import). 3. In the F2F in March 2004, we indicated we did not acknowledge 'dependent' choreographies (the blue boxes) that exist in the package or root (blue box). How then can we handle dependencies between imported, performed and choreographies with root=false? UDDI reference - implementation option for Registry isolation
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