some minor editorial comments

• From: <paul.downey@bt.com>
• Date: Thu, 6 Jan 2005 08:58:30 -0000
• To: <public-ws-chor-comments@w3.org>
• Message-ID: <2B7789AAED12954AAD214AEAC13ACCEF2709DEB3@i2km02-ukbr.domain1.systemhost.net>

- Introduction for WSDL "Data types are defined by XML Schema". 
  WSDL 2.0 also supports types defined in other systems such as 
  DTD, RelaxNG and RDF. 

- 2.2.1 this pseudo-syntax style is out of step with other 
  examples in the document. it would be clearer if the elements 
  were defined as "<informationType/>*", "<token/>*", etc 

- 2.2.2 example has missing close quote from xpointer attribute 

Also i was slightly thrown by the "editor's copy" of the CDL spec 
being older than the "published" last call version on the group page. 

Received on Thursday, 6 January 2005 08:57:37 UTC