FW: WS-RM editorial comment

 

 

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From: Bob Freund 
Sent: Tuesday, September 19, 2006 10:57 AM
To: 'ws-rx-comment@lists.oasis-open.org'
Subject: WS-RM editorial comment

 

As chair of WS-Addressing I am forwarding the following comment on
behalf of the group:

 

Concerning MakeConnection

1)       It's not specified in line 809 that MakeConnection appears as a
body element rather than a header.  In fact, MakeConnection isn't
described as an element at all - it's described as an operation.  See
line 312 as an example of clearer text.

2)       Line 811 says "no SOAP envelopes will be returned on the
back-channel."  I think "envelopes" should be singular.

 

Thanks

-bob