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[whatwg] Editorial, section 1.5

From: Elliotte Rusty Harold <elharo@ibiblio.org>
Date: Wed, 5 Aug 2009 17:00:05 -0700
Message-ID: <654a2bb30908051700k503564f1i4e1605da304bab01@mail.gmail.com>
I suggest simply deleting "It must be admitted that many aspects of
HTML appear at first glance to be nonsensical and inconsistent." I
would disagree with nonsensical, and in any case this sentence adds
nothing to the text.

However if this sentence is retained, at least deleted "It must be
admitted that" in favor of simply "Many aspects of HTML appear at
first glance to be nonsensical and inconsistent" or better yet "Many
aspects of HTML appear at first glance to be inconsistent" or even
"Many aspects of HTML are inconsistent."

If any part of this sentence is retained, it should be combined with
the following paragraph. In fact, the first 3 paragraphs could likely
be combined.

-- 
Elliotte Rusty Harold
elharo at ibiblio.org
Received on Wednesday, 5 August 2009 17:00:05 UTC

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