- From: Ian Hickson <ian@hixie.ch>
- Date: Tue, 22 Apr 2008 10:38:58 +0000 (UTC)
On Sat, 11 Mar 2006, Aankhen wrote: > > > On 3/11/06, Ian Hickson <ian at hixie.ch> wrote: > > [snip] > > I've reworded the paragraph like this: > > > > <p>Some conformance requirements are phrased as requirements on > > elements, attributes, methods or objects. Such requirements fall > > into two categories; those describing content model restrictions, > > and those describing implementatino behaviour. > > Minor change: that should probably be a full colon there rather than a > semi-colon. Fixed. > > The former category of requirements are requirements on documents and > > authoring tools. The second category are requirements on user > > agents.</p> > > Is there a need to say "of requirements" after "category"? It seems > unnecessary. Perhaps this might do: > > "The former category describes requirements on documents and > authoring tools. The second describes requirements on user > agents." I recommend not worrying too much about this level of detail of the wording. :-) -- Ian Hickson U+1047E )\._.,--....,'``. fL http://ln.hixie.ch/ U+263A /, _.. \ _\ ;`._ ,. Things that are impossible just take longer. `._.-(,_..'--(,_..'`-.;.'
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