- From: Aankhen <aankhen@gmail.com>
- Date: Sat, 11 Mar 2006 11:32:10 +0530
On 3/11/06, Ian Hickson <ian at hixie.ch> wrote: > [snip] > I've reworded the paragraph like this: > > <p>Some conformance requirements are phrased as requirements on > elements, attributes, methods or objects. Such requirements fall > into two categories; those describing content model restrictions, > and those describing implementatino behaviour. Minor change: that should probably be a full colon there rather than a semi-colon. > The former category > of requirements are requirements on documents and authoring > tools. The second category are requirements on user agents.</p> Is there a need to say "of requirements" after "category"? It seems unnecessary. Perhaps this might do: "The former category describes requirements on documents and authoring tools. The second describes requirements on user agents." Aankhen -- "Why don't you go on a diet!" "Because I like to eat! Is that a crime?"
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