ETRI Comments and proposal :: for Web-based signage scenarios and use cases

HI Futomi and all,

For the document, Web-based signage scenarios and use cases,  below is my comments and proposal for current document.

i think the document's scope and purpose need to be clear, as an output of BG activity.
It means that this document is not W3C standard specifcation, but survey document or deliverable toward formal group, in my understanding.

Therefore, something below seems need to consider again,
 - the document scope and purpose is clear or proper , as a biz group document ?
- use case, scenario, solutions , relevant w3c standards are need to covered all in this current document?
- in current document, is now necessary to describe relevant detailed solutions from use case-scenario?

So, i suggest some modification for current document before further documentation.
i wish that Futomi,as a main editor, review the proposal and give your idea among members.

This version is modified from current version .
(origin :  http://www.w3.org/community/websignage/wiki/Web-based_Signage_Scenarios_and_Use_Cases )

And, I prepared rechartered version for the current document, and the file is attached with word format.

- section 2(new) is added, the purpose of document
- original section 3 is deleted and the text is removed into section 4.
- section 4 is reorganized a little.
- a figure, generic diagram for use case and scenario(???), is added in section 4.

- it is still need further work.....


Now,  i am not also strongly sure that  the proposal is best or proper direction.
So i wish to hear your idea for the version.


Best regards,

Sunghan


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보낸 사람 : "Futomi Hatano" <futomi.hatano@newphoria.co.jp>
보낸 날짜 : 2012-08-03 22:14:06 ( +09:00 )
받는 사람 : public-websignage@w3.org <public-websignage@w3.org>
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제목 : Survey on Community and Business Group Experience


Hi all,

As part of improving Community and Business Groups, W3C has opened a survey:
https://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/1/2012CGBGsurvey/

Could you cooperate with the survey?

Thank you.
Futomi

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